Just go eat lunch with Mizuki, it will all work out.

This. Is. Amazing!

Wow. I never really understood Yuki's behaviour in the park until now... what you wrote makes perfect sense. Thank you so much!

Oh my 3

This was beautiful.. Yuki's inner mind is captured perfectly, especially when he argues with his inner mind. The way you describe and form your words make me smile. It's so good.

Again, a joy to read, because I think this would match Yuki's inner mind perfectly. The inner emotional chaos, his fantasy of "this boy" .. the desriptions are spot on! 3

That was amazing. Reading through the thurough descriptions, emotions and memories really amused me. The way this was written is sort of how I'd imagine Yuki thinking.

Amazing, overall3

Awesome. You have a great way with words. I could definetly picture Yuki rambling with such a complex vocabulary. Good job!

WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE!

No not the end please continue this was very well written and i like it alot :D

First off, I want to thank you for writing this fanfic. It's been a while since I've managed to find fanfics from Gravitation that are *this* well written.

I've noticed that among the well-written fanfics, there are not alot that actually explore Yuki Eiri's personality as a writer. This is where your fic really shines; it's unique and it actually gives the readers a rare glimpse of what's going on in the mind of Yuki Eiri the writer. I certainly hope that you are willing to write a sequel since I really liked Yuki's 'voice'.

Once again, thanks for bringing quality writing back as well as bringing depth to your characters.

This is quite possibly the most in character Yuki I've ever read on this site.

Fantastic job.

-Angel

Uh, was that last 'reviewer' frothing at the mouth or what? You could practically see the spit on the screen. Geez.

But enough of unimportant things-this was wonderful! I finally had a chance to catch up on my reading. I felt this was a perfect place to stop, but we want a sequel! We all know Shu got under Eiri's skin from the very start, and you showed that perfectly. I just love Eiri-in-denial. Methinks he doth protest to much!

Oh oh OH, please continue! Please don't let the idea lay down and die! Pick it up! Breathe life into it!

I really loved this. Your peek into Yuki's mind was really intersting. I like how we don't know Shuichi's name - because, of course, he only tells him later on after Yuki takes him to his apartment.

I wish you *would* write the entire anime in Yuki's PoV! This is going on my favorites, as well as my alerts, in case you update ;)

And if you don't, then thanks for a wonderful read!

~Nini

You are my favorite person right now. This was amazing, my coffee went cold but who cares, this was way better. It was beautiful and so well described, it had everything I look for in a story... I'm at a lost for words right now... Bravo. This piece surpass greatness.

~SexyRyu~

Oh, I love this chapter! Every bit of it. Makes me wanna pat Yuki's head and snuggle him and twirl Shuichi around for making him feel all these things. Basically, this made me happy. :D

I would LOVE to read a sequel, I like seeing this story through Yuki's eyes - getting into his brain. :D

That was a great way to end it! You are SO awesome! I love the bit about him forgeting and ten remembering again when he sees Shuichi. I certainly do hope for a sequel. Very nicely done and keep up the good work :)