Does anyone else know that Zane and Syrus are BROTHERS?!

Lol I spelt grammar wrong !

Beautiful it's really beautiful

and don't Listen to all that 'the gramers' wrong crap I think it adds

a sense of meaning to the story thank you so much I'm a big

fan of syrus and Zane brilliant work

I've never read such a beautiful story that made me both so sad and so happy at the same time!

WONDERFUL!

OMG, the story's really something. Although I'm not a Sho/Ryo fan, I really liked it. Hm, well, there was one thing though - you seemed to confuse in the sentences pretty much. I'm no master of English, but for most part the grammar was pretty much messed up. At least so I think. If you could fix it - or just inform me that I'm wrong - I'd be really grateful.

Anyway, great fic.

that was great... in a sad kind of way.. Finally Zane actually lets his emotions go. great tragedy one shot...

P.S. when are you going to update -.-