Aah, this remind me so much about the last parts of Mai's route (my fave, BTW)

Beautifully written, and so in-character.

Good poem, it was written very well and expressed Yuuichi nicely. I love this pair _

beautifully written, I like Yuuichi's voice, seems both original and IC; only problem is that there isn't an established pattern, there should have been two more lines before the end for more impact; still, awesome job as always!

Wow... Heh heh.

You've been on a roll of Kanon fanfiction and each has been excellent as well as varied. You've written different pairings, each done excellently at that. An awesome round of work. Definitely an excellent round of work.