Reviews for Dragonfly on the Wall |
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HPforever2018-3 chapter 16 . 3/24/2019 Such an original story. Loved it. Would I have liked it to be longer? Yes! Didn't like the mirror thing, it was too over the top for my liking, but everything else was wonderful. And so original. I have read quite a lot of Dramoine in the years, but I have never come across a plot like this. Great job! |
Guest chapter 16 . 6/9/2018 A very abrupt ending. Actually I thought there were more, when I reached the end. I moronically tried to click for the next chapter. A wonderful story in many ways. I dislike the portrait part and the unfinished ending, but otherwise I enjoyed the tale. |
FriendofTrees chapter 16 . 6/6/2018 This was very fun. I really enjoyed the picture characters freaking out. Quite funny. |
Guest chapter 15 . 12/27/2017 Draco, for this reason only, is why he is my favorite in the series |
JerricaHMcfarl3 chapter 1 . 9/23/2017 so great can't wait for more like this |
luxaeterna22 chapter 16 . 9/17/2017 This was fantastic. You are such a compelling author, and you wrote the characters of Draco and Hermione so well. I read the whole thing in one sitting, it was bloody exceptional. |
Ali989969 chapter 7 . 7/13/2017 I don't typically review stories that are older than my youngest child, but I'm making an exception. I really like this story and especially your Draco. He's just snarky enough not to be completely ooc. However... Knickers are panties. Not generic underwear. Specifically panties. Unless Draco is wearing frilly bikinis or satin hipsters, he's not wearing knickers. But thanks for that mental image. It's hilarious. |
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 16 . 5/16/2017 CUTE! And crafty, I love it |
HotFucia chapter 1 . 4/24/2017 You have many spelling and grammatical errors, which, really deteriorated my attention on the story. Great concept and story idea but you should consider revising your wording. There are many places where you jump from one part of the story to the next and it's all rather confusing. Other than that, points for creativity. |
Guest chapter 14 . 2/6/2017 Hermione needs to ward her clothing from uncouth clothes thieves. |
Guest chapter 13 . 2/6/2017 Personal space isn't a concept any of them actually know, is it. |
Guest chapter 12 . 2/6/2017 Why is Hermione so ok with Draco reading her mind? |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/6/2017 Did Hermione's mind suddenly go soft? In both the books and the movies she would have hexed Ron. |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/6/2017 I don't like how badgering her "friends" are. Like Neville couldn't tell that was NOT the time to be hounding her? Like the rest of them couldn't tell right then wasn't the time to be harassing her for information just after she found out Ron has been sleeping around and is even dating someone else now? With friends like that who needs a hoard of gnats swarming their head? |
Wow chapter 5 . 1/25/2017 WOAH HOT. That was a very well written chapter! |