Your writing is excellent. It brings them to life in such a real way. No other writer has wrote them this well. I'm not a critic, i love all the stories. Your's are different. But the show-i could not believe that scene in the show. I remember it and Bobby didn't do anything as usual. I thought the shows writers actually hated women. I wondered if Mariska Hargatay, SVU would have that line written about her. Totally insulting and unnecessary. Love to tell the writers and VDO that. However, you are an excellent storyteller. Thanks for writing.

reread the previous fics before this...had to reacquaint myself..i l love this!) thank you

Beautiful.

The entire time I read this, I had my hands covering my mouth- that sort of shock/despair/wonder you get when you watch a particularly heart-wrenching scene- and by the end my eyes hurt from keeping back the tears. Damn wonderful.

sweet and moving and just completely lovely. i adore your writing.

I've read this so many times it's embarrassing...!

Aww. This felt completely in character. Very beautiful and very sexy. I loved it. I can totally see it happening this way. Emotions are high and it just happens. They happen and sort the rest out later. LOL God, this was so great. :) Fabulous work. :)

OOC my ass! It's awkward and deep and personal. Like it SHOULD be. To finally be at that point with someone so...GAH! You made me feel it, really really feel it. Your writing is everything I wish mine was...On to the next one now!

luffles...

I wish I could find words that are deep, and erudite, and well-considered. I wish I could match your craft with a little - just a tiny bit would do - of my own.

I'm addicted. I need more of this. Don't make me beg -

Another great story and an excellent follow-up to Near Death. I really enjoy your writing style and I think you've captured the understated complexity of their relationship very well. Terrific job and I look forward to more of your work.

beauty!

it was amazing. when i finished the end, i had to exhale because i realized i was holding my breath. please, write more. you have talent.

Very awesome. I love the way this was written. Its very different but I LOVE it!

~Snyder~

very nice!

Like the line

When she comes she doesn’t make a sound because she doesn’t know what kind of sound to make with Bobby. Instead she buries her head in his neck and hangs on hangs on hangs on.

very much.

They are so pefect for each other.

THANKS