Ok so this was really sweet. Confused/Insane Sheppard seemed a little more...barbaric in his speech, (not full setences and the like) than I'd have expected, but it still worked. I liked the friendship themes in here, showing the bond between Sheppard and Teyla without making it romance. There seemed to be a fine line between the two in here, but I love how you kept it right on that line, that you could read so much into their words and actions.

I'm glad Sheppard didn't actually go insane, and I loved how Teyla took care of him. Keep up the great work!

Loved it :) You're a very talented writer :) You kept me on my toes through the whole thing!

I would say you nailed it, not that my opinion counts.

Thanks for the ride. It was great.

Your cadence for their voices is right on, as well.

You did a really good job with this, but it was just too short.

What can I say, a good long Sheppard whump is a delight for any day. Team whumpage is always extra points.

Yes, I'm almost a month late! Wonderful addition to the challenge. Teyla and John, the trust between the two. So wonderful. Of course classic whump and team yumminess. Well done!

It broke my widdle heart when he showed up to the meeting at the wrong time :( poor, muddle-headed boy. love Teyla and John wub without the smut. thanks for this!

Another great John centered story! I like the Teyla/John interaction... I'm not a shipper, but I do believe that they have an unique relationship. It's good to see how much she's helped him in this story.

They were all very much in character(once again). I especially loved the moment where Rodney announced that he couldn't go back to the planet and how much they were going to miss him. That one struck me as a typical McKay thing to say. Of course, the comfort and the hurt were wonderfully written as well.

I love how you described John's character. I imagine he'd be hurt should his memory fail him. And the team planning to help him get through that rough period was very nice to read. No babysitting... right!

So, my compliments on yet again a wonderful story!

Loved it! Great whump and wonderful friendship! I think you got all the characters down really well, too. Thank you!

You covered the Sheppard H/C Secret Santa prompt quite nicely and the result is a satisfying Shep Whump/Team Whump as seen through Teyla's eyes. Love it!

I also love that, at the end of your excellent fic, you included the prompts for it.

A great story, full of action and deep angst. Loved that special connection between Teyla and an ailing Sheppard.

I think you nailed your prompt and did a great job with it! Very scary for him, being that confused and disoriented, but oh, yummy for us!

Favorite line: Operation Keep Sheppard Occupied - *grin*

Thanks for this, so much! And I'm being so spoiled with these stories, they've been long and yummy!

I loved it. Not only Shep whump but also a bit of team whump, fabulous job!

I really dug this nice twist, leaving the mystery to what happened to Sheppard behind closed doors. I loved how you focused on trying to get a confused John home over the details of what caused his trauma. Absolutly loved using Teyla's point of view and honestly I find it very difficult to get inside her head. You had her spot on and I'm glad she was able to get through to Sheppard on some level..using his protective nature to help him.

My favorite part though was the last quarter of the fic. You didn't try to rush things, drugs and more than one concussion takes time. My favorite scene was when John arrived an hour late, his confusion then humiliation was poignant.

Then the “Operation keep Sheppard Occupied" was icing on the cake...really dug those parts and wanted more.

Awesome story! I loved all the interaction between the team and Carson. And just curious, did you take Amy from the amazing unfinished story Behind Those Eyes?

I'd say you hit the prompt right on the head . Congtarulations. A grand romp. Would have liked to see Ronon dispense justice, but hey that happens. Thanks for sharing.

wow thanks for the great story poor john was so confused . :)