THIS IS SOOOOO GOOOOOOD! I WANT MORE! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THISSSS!

I don't know and stuff. Since I do give a childish image of innocence and stuff, but I'll say it. It was... Okay? Wakaranai you! I'm a kid for fuck's sake! Either way, I think it's okay. Your clothing sense's awesome.

Can you post a link to the story you based this off of? I can't find it.

*drool* ;]]]]]]]]]]

you like taTu don't you.

This was so smaxey, we love it

aww this was so cute~!

Ohh i loved it O

...you said 'my first lemon' twice...oh well.

No, I think it's a perfect length with a really sweet ending. You did a great job on it.

P.S.- can I join your marshmallow roast? It's cold down under and I'm hungry!

O_O That was hot...very hot...good job! -LOL- Very good job! Hehehehehe

Ooh, nice and hot. XD Not appropriate for now since it's summer and all, but oh well. :3

Oh, the Devil's Trill. It isn't by this Vanessa Mae. Its by a man named Tartini. He's the original composer, Vanessa is just doing a cover version of it.(sorry, I'm just a huge classical music fan.)

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Anyway...(adds to favorites)

i luved it and im not messing with lavi and lenalee

I'm tempted to flame because roasted marshmallows are just that good but this fic was so delcious they are not needed! Yum!

YUM YUM.

pretty good for a

firtsy

OMG! I loved it!

Allen-kun is such a tease it's almost too funny xD

Kisses him and just runs off, ha! That's amazing x3

You should write another fanfic like this, it was really good...Though...I would suggest a little Kanda/Lavi instead xD

this story was absolutely amazing!