I'm not a fan of death fics bit the story was good. Love both these shows. How about a crossover with NCIS Los Ángeles but no major character deaths?

Great story,awesome action scenes,interesting plot,and a good ending that eneded a bit sadly but also happily, completely amazing. Your a great story author.

This was a fascinating story, well written and well done. I'm surprised more people haven't commented.

The combination of Without a Trace and NCIS was beautiful.

Thank you for a job well done.

Sincerely,

Miriam

Love the story so far it is awesome but you made a mistake you wrote...

“This is Agent Ziva Davide and Agent Tony McGee.” Tony gave a slight wave of his hand.

It should be Officer Ziva David not Agent Ziva Davide, and Timothy aka Tim McGee not Tony.

~Tala~

omg i am so glad u didnt kill martin! lol but u wrote a great chapter. really emotional and heart touching... just sad! keep up the good work... ur doing great!

That was a Very Heart Breaking AWESOME Chapter. I'm sorry that

Danny got killed. I'm glad that it wasn't Jack though. If Jack

had gotten killed that would have been the end of the story for

me. I hope that everybody's Heart goes out to them. Keep up the

Awesome Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter. THANK YOU!

I Truly Loved this Chapter. I hope that Jack can get the creep.

I really had hoped that Gibbs was going to be there to help him

capture the guy. I also hope that Sam is going to be able to put

this behind her and go back to being a real good FBI Agent that

she was. I also hope that Jack get's to beat the hell out of the

creep also. After what he has done to Jack's bad leg, I hope that

Jack is going to give him his just do's. Keep up the AWESOME

Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter. Please get it

Posted Soon! THANK YOU!

I feel so bad for Sam, when I was shot, it was like that for me, I broke down, remembering that, but nothing compared to the terror that you would feel from that. The horrible feeling that will haunt her the rest of her life. This is a hauntingly wonderful story, keep updating please!

Hi, just finished reading the 14th chap. and must i say that u're doing a great job. i like wat ur doing with the caracters, making them all play a role in things... hopefully u can get Abbie involved too...

keep it up!

omg i swear that u have done an awesome job with the story... its bloody brilliant mate lol... keep up the good work!

you do a very nice job with the characters in this story. It is very enjoyable. Keep it up.

Oh, this is good stuff. I'm really hoping you post another chapter soon!

Wow. This isn't what I expected. Which is fine with me! Good chapter...now I'm off to the next one! Reading a bunch of chapters all at once is really cool...

Wow. I love the sense of urgency I feel as I'm reading this. This is totally on-the-edge-of-your-seat reading. The pacing is just perfect!

GAHH! Please, oh pretty please, can we give us some more. I have to know more of this wonderful fan fiction! I really need to know what the final result is! Is Sam going to be okay? Please, I'm kissing your feet, begging you!