No doubt this is based upon something related to The Wizard of Oz. I haven't seen this Tin Man series in any case, though I've heard of it. One doesn't need to know all the details to feel the emotions/subject matter come across to the reader. It somewhat follows the pattern of a stream of consciousness type work. In other words, whatever comes into the character's mind (which is a single, determined objective).

Overall good, but quite disturbing. Then again, it's supposed to be, so that shouldn't matter. : )

I really like this POV, with the evil witch having these thoughts inside Azkadellia. It's almost as if she is guiding her, but to a certain extent, because these are her wishes and Az is really an innocent bystander.

I really liked the flow of this and I enjoyed it immensely. Makes me kind of think of the witch as a demented cheerleader inside Az...Yep, that's my weird sense of humor but you know that already.

Great job! :)

A nice little glimpse of 'the demon within'!

Wowwies. Intense is the best word I can find for this. Even though we don't really get a lot of dialogue from the witch, this feels really, really in character for some reason. Just so... evil! And there's no leniency at all. Awesome sauce job, and I'm looking forward to more *hint hint*