Reviews for Hold me
ailudelastiernas chapter 43 . 12/15/2019
Yori y Aido? Whats? No ví venir esa! Cómo, en qué momento?
ailudelastiernas chapter 31 . 12/13/2019
Recemos todos
ailudelastiernas chapter 30 . 12/12/2019
Estos chicos necesitan más clases acerca de educación sexual, se ha dicho. Impactante, realmente sin palabras quedé.
ailudelastiernas chapter 15 . 12/12/2019
Awwwww. Más tiernos esos dos.
ailudelastiernas chapter 11 . 12/11/2019
En serio sus manos son el tercer protagonista en esta historia, lo juro! Ajajaj. No importa, les queda, les dá un algo, un no sé qué.
ailudelastiernas chapter 7 . 12/11/2019
Definitivamente vale la pena leer esta historia.
ailudelastiernas chapter 4 . 12/11/2019
Cielo o infierno? Decidite! Ajaja
ailudelastiernas chapter 1 . 12/11/2019
La historia promete, promete mucho D
fanofthisfiction chapter 60 . 10/16/2018
Firstly, I have to congratulate you on this momentous occasion. I know it's several years late, but it's a congratulations all the same. What a huge undertaking this was. I mean 60 chapters...whoa! I can't imagine getting to that point, let alone thinking of where to go with that many chapters!

How fitting you chose to end with Zero being the wonderful, thoughtful husband who loves Yuuki with every fiber of his being. He gets to have another Princess (Yuko) to spoil and potentially a double following of boys too!

As you well know, there were some serious concerns I had earlier in the fic with the bathroom scene but I wanted to see how you wrote your way through the mess and what ultimately you had envisioned in the end. It took a lot of thought on your part to move forward and I'm sure the gradual progression was by no means an easy task, but it's truly wonderful to know you stuck to it and managed to get to a sweet and memorable end.

In some ways I think it was crazy of me to take on this fic, having zero knowledge of the fandom. I'm sure some subtleties passed over my head but I must say it was a great learning experience seeing how you as the author plowed through and made your way from point A to point B. No Yen, this doesn't mean I'll contemplate a 60 chapter story, but hopefully it's given me tools to try to see if I can work through story problems and solutions a little better.

Thank you again for sharing your stories on the site. This is definitely the longest story I've reviewed in a fandom I knew nothing about and I have to credit that to your writing. Thanks again for sharing and here's hoping many more story ideas continue to come your way.
fanofthisfiction chapter 59 . 10/10/2018
I imagine there was high expectation on your part to 'deliver,' on this chapter. All the moments leading up to this sensual marital union after the incident in the bathroom were carefully crafted and when Zero's tenderness and patience spilled over into his love for Yuuki, it showed to no end, he was truly a good person, and the right person for Yuuki.

Just so you know, this chapter definitely ran big on romance and sensuality, depicting a very memorable wedding night, leading no doubt to a beautiful future ahead.

Oh my goodness, I am on Chapter 59. Can you believe it? In looking back, I am glad I kept reading, even after the terrifying moment in the bathroom. You took on a big incident that elicited strong feelings and slowly moved away from it, all the while building their relationship from there.

As an author, I know, the path to story building is not always an easy one, and I must say, you bravely took on some hot topics with underage minors that pushed buttons, however you were skillfully able to insert ideals to think about along the way and concocted a very memorable story of your own. I can almost see the story ending here but there's one more chapter so I'll have to see what you have planned next.

Whew, what a huge undertaking this story was but you must have been happy it was near complete at this point. Thanks for sharing!
Yuki Cross chapter 60 . 10/9/2018
Zero and Yuki forever️ You’re story is magnificent. I loved every single chapter of it. Please write more stories on them.
Sarah chapter 60 . 10/9/2018
Best story ever ️ :’) A masterpiece
ZeroXYuki chapter 60 . 10/9/2018
I’m literally in tears this beautiful story has finally ended and I find myself wanting more! I can’t praise you enough for the way you’ve written the entire story. You had be glued onto it for nights and sometimes right till dawn! Zero and Yuki are my favourite anime couple and the way their love found eachother just made me teary eyed :’3 I’ll miss this story, please do write more Yuki & Zero fanfics. Your work is amazing ️
fanofthisfiction chapter 58 . 10/4/2018
This chapter caught me by surprise, but in a good way.

I liked what you did here. To show us that Zero was able to wait, not only through the three years of dating, but purposely decide to keep his promise and to wait until their wedding day to consummate with Yuuki really showed how much he had changed and how much better in control he was of himself and how well he'd matured.

Additionally, I can't get over how incredibly good the Aido baby was in all the encounters he came into the picture, (laughs) but with that said, I smiled with the little 'gift' Hanabusa left for Zero. Not all babies are 'perfect' like him after all.

The romance leading up to this moment was lovely and you made me smile that Zero was taken aback that he wasn't supposed to wear his usual cotton pajamas on this special night, although I'm sure he was grateful for the gift once he saw Yuuki's ensemble.

The readers must have been on the edge of their seats at this point. I for one can't believe I'm come this far on a VK fic, and with an "M" one at that. Thanks for sharing!
fanofthisfiction chapter 57 . 10/1/2018
Oh my. The binding promise is like the green light to marry and I imagine go onto have a family. The three years that passed moved them from school and onto a career path plus a little time to know if there love could be strong even when doing things separately. I think it makes up happy they waited but I imagine this is leading up to a union. Am I right? Thanks for sharing!
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