that was hilarious! now we know why he always calls himself, "This Sesshomaru. snicker

Muito bom adorei você e um ótima escritora

*bangs head* really Kagome? You would rather leave that unexplained and let them think you're a sexual freak? The misunderstanding was kinda funny but her stupidity afterwards isn't at all. Good thing Sango has some sense.

Please please please I hope you didn't make this a stupid Kagome in this story...cuz this chapter's getting me worried. I love your idea and would love to read it but I know I'll drop it if I see a dumb Kags

Yes Maru! Thank you! The names were getting a bit confusing. Actually, Maru may not even have a name since he was taken from his parent at birth, I doubt his slavers would've called him Killing Perfection...or maybe they did.

And one Kagome and two Sesshomarus? One who is emotionally open and happy to share his feelings? What a frickin brilliant idea and wonderful world! *sigh*

Wowzers, what a shocking paragraph to start a story! Brilliant twist! Love it!

I was ROTFL at her mom's gun! A first in all the IY FFs I've read! If Kagome can bring a gun or even a tranquilizer, Naraku would be a breeze! lol

And cunning Lord Sesshomaru! Whereas everyone's trying to see if the new guy's a threat, he alone has already concluded that the dude could make a great Beta for his pack... haha

I really loved the story. It was a great read.

I loved this story, you have a great imagination!

That was so freaking awesome. I laughed, cried, and nearly throw up. Keep up the good work.

I think I almost peed on myself reading some parts of this story. I love this

Umm yeah what a turn of events LOL

Woah I wonder who is the father LOL

Well let the battle begin LOL

Karma just made Naraku her bitch and I love it!

Does he (Naraku) always I'm he wouldn't be himself if he didn't. Ooh and I wonder if "Maru" and "Saber" will get together?

Omg You should totally write a story about the world that Inuyasha fell into. It sounds like a great story. I'm sure anyone would love to read it. Much like myself. I am enjoying this storyz please continue writting you are amazing.