I’d assume I’ve already left a comment here , but just In case , I LOVE it !
Every single line in this Is a GEM

Great story so far! We love how it's played out in scenarios. This is our first fanfic to read on this cite so a rather great introduction to the fandom. Thanks for writing it!

I got to say, your story is in my top 4 funniest FF 12 fanfiction here. Every chapter is a blast to read, making me lol everytime. I really hope you'll continue this story.

Hehe this was really funny! Good job!

This fic never fails to keep me laughing even though this is the third time I've read it. Your insights into the odd parts of the game are so well laid bare in all their ridiculousness it's truly amazing how good this fic is. To be honest I nearly died of joy when I saw this had been updated, I had a small funeral for it with a scented candle and everything, but lo and behold it claws it's way up out of the grave. I can't wait for the next chapter!

You know that feeling when you've convinced yourself that you did something, and for a very long while believe that, only to realize all of a sudden that no, you did not?

And so here I sit, writing an abominably late review. xD

Balthier, this is why we hide the rum. Incidentally, this is the same reason why Tomaj stocks up on rum, because he's all for the show. XD But Vaan, don't you know that non-candle light dinners could be laced with iocane powder? And Basch, you long-suffering man... I don't know whether I laughed more at your segment or Ashe and Vaan's conversation about Vayne. xD

Mwahaha, what secrets are held in Fammy's diary? Will Fran remember any of them due to her current level of intoxication? Is Penelo most likely to pin this all on Vaan? (We'll soon find out, perhaps, and most likely).

LOL LOVED IT. I ACTUALLY HAVEN'T FINISHED FF12 YET (ON THE LAST PART & READ BOUY THE ENDIND THOUGH). BUT WHO'S NOAH?

Penelo isn't the only one who's officially impressed with Fran's hearing! Those're some crazy good ears she's got there. And somehow being able to blood pressure is far more hilarious than it might seem on first hearing!

I love Basch being so judgmental of Balthier getting

I got a kick out of it indeed! (Which means I laughed for about 5 straight minutes.) I like the idea that Balthier keeps Siyana's calling card under his pillow. :D

I also enjoyed the reference to Balthier's shoes!

Oooooh how pissed is Balthier with Vaan using his real name? (That becomes kind of a big deal in my story lol)

Other favourite lines:

"Vaan. You can't see cyanide."

and

"I take my leave."
"Does he have to say that every time he leaves a room?"

Hilarious as always!

Oh, god; Balthier's journal. I'm not sure the world is ready...

This is definitely better than the last chapter. How about some larsa and the judges next?

"You don't know where that pavement's been!"

Sweet Unholy Espers, Penny of the Projects rules this chapter. XD Everyone's reaction to becoming an unintended audience was brilliant, from nosebleeds to professional nouns (oh my word, professional nouns XD). Between roller skates and Larsa being defaced via dictionary entries, not to mention the litany of curses from Balthier and Fran... I don't consider this a weak chapter at all. Especially since it offers the promise of a drunk Viera. x3

(Just don't let Yuffie get a hold of Vaan and Shelke talking about the renting out of frontal lobes.)

So many great one liners in this! As a linguist, I personally loved PROFESSIONAL NOUNS, that one had me rolling on the floor! Welcome back!

The answer to that last question is: everyone. Everyone wants to see a drunk viera.

...also, now I want to draw Yuffie and Vaan being vocabulary flash card buddies. Utter chaos would result, of course, at least until Shelke and Penelo arrived to haul them apart... Or prevent them from mounting some ridiculous heist, one of the two.

Weak? I laughed my ass off at this one! And yes he is. Yes he really... *sigh* really is.