as a fan of goof troop i have to say i totally love this short story its coo land chill i like how you used the episode and just fast forwarded 15 years. also i remember the episode of goof troop i am a huge fan of cartoon and goofy is totally funny one of my favorites. plus Peggy is of course phat as heck(pretty hot and tempting ) for cartoon of course. very attractive cartoon but any way the wording you used and the way you got into the 3rd person role speaking as the character Spud and talking about how he and his partner want revenge it was good very good.

Three words. Spacing. Between. Paragraphs. Seriously, it's just one big wall of text and it really puts me off, as well as causing me to lose all interest in reading it. I'm not saying this to be rude or mean.

LOL I THINK U WAS TRYING TO TELL US SOMETHING ABOUT THE DATE...MAYBE YOU'RE GONNA DO ANOTHER STORY ABOUT EM...MAYBE LOL

that was interesting.

why did they get 20 years? for a burglary the punishment at the very MAX is 15 years usefully much less however because people were there when they broke in they might get the full 15 years. sorry I just get upset when I see people getting fake sentences in stories

why did they get 20 years? for a burglary the punishment at the very MAX is 15 years usefully much less however because people were there when they broke in they might get the full 15 years. sorry I just get upset when I see people getting fake sentences in stories