It’s very easy to see Lily like this.

I absolutely loved this, the way you wrote James was just perfection and thrilling to read. From the way you described his eyes to the mischievous looks he gives Hermione, it reminds us how precious life is, especially after he came back from the dead! Lucky bloke ;)
Also enjoyed how evil you made Lily too, I'm not sure Lily was that sly in canon (though really who can say? since JK still hasn't written marauder era books), yet the story is still brilliant and you made me adore and ship this couple. Love this story and Jamione. You are an awesome writer :)

Awwww

Interesant but one problem. It was known that Voldemort wanted to kill Harry. So if Lily really planed to kill James this way and be with Snape then she would include Haarys death in this plan (or have a better escape option).

I'm not sure what I just read xD

aww, cute, i like how you wrote Lily, all we know about her is Severus fucked up and called her a mudblood, ONCE and she forever turned her back on him, so we really dont know mch about her... i think Jo should write a fic about THIER hogwarts years... and the neext gen kids... and theirs and more books xD haha

I can see lily actually like this...

I LOVE how different this story is :)

This was fantastic! But man, Lily IS a scary bitch. Great work! :)

I really liked this, I think I would have liked to have read more of the back story but other then that it was great.

Definitely a different take on Lily, and an interesting one. I like it.

Nice one. I found out I like evil Lily and evil Dombledore. Its kind of refreshing

thats and interesting spin on it!:)

Awesome. Making Lily a bit crazy? Perfect. Really made the story all the better. Great job. That was fun to read.

~Tori

Wow I just abhor Lily right now... Although you did capture the fact that she is Petunia's sister lol