I like this! Please update soon!

Great beginning, I'm want to know what she rights in her little black book.

I hope you update soon!

I loved the first two sort of paragraphs in this chapter, it was sad yet, beautiful. Can't wait to read more, Mage6 :)

like your story so far please write more

i really like it. i see what you mean by him awakening his craft. if he just started using i would have wondered what happened. so thanks alot

I like it. :) so far you've basically stayed true with the characters. I hope to read more.

Nice story so far, I like it! Please continue:)