ok so this is an amasing storie kinda touching, and also has amasing potential to make many chapters. each one can be of a differnt experience. write me back for any ideas.

ok... that was slightly distubing... :&

The ages are very far off.. Especially Sunny's...

And I'm actually surprised that they have so many Violet/Klaus fics. ...Incest isn't my greatest interest...

the reason it needs more developing is that it's copied from dante's stars chapter 3. get an original idea.

erm...hmm...

not the best i've ever read but not terrible. it jsut feels like it needs more developing somehow...like you go off on a tangent and don't really come back...

i dunno, i still enjoyed it.

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Very, very OOC. I think you just used the characters to produce smut. xDD

But, who cares? Free world.

(WHERE I GET KLAUS, BIATCH)