Koga throwing Miroku out a window XD lmaooo

Honestly I'm in love with this story...I think you,should deff do a sequel maybe a few years later and such because I feel it's just not complete yet :•]

Really enjoyed this chapter. I'm surprised Miroku didn't come up to Sango yet if he's there. I understand Bankotsu & Kouga's turmoil about the friendship, but it seemed like Kouga wasn't having doubts till Bank spelled out his issues. Wondering what he tried to do to the other two boys, but still slightly shocked he caused the car accident.

You've drawn me in & I hope we learn about Miroku's past. Not sure how Kag & Mat are going to party together.

To reviewer Jay: I have been thoroughly enjoying your honest commentary and reviews when they come across my have some really good questions and comments that I didn't think about! I wish you had an account so I could send a personal message instead of writing in my review box (lol! I feel like I’m cheating because this isn’t a review) If you happen to see this, thank you! \(_)/

On the positive side, everything that happened on the run will make the sickness more believable. Losing his phone to a storm drain though is going to be a hell of a story to explain away.

I've been trying to figure out for awhile how Kagome is affording everything. She doesn't seem to have a job. Also not sure why she hasn't had contact with her family even though I believe it's been well over a month since she was set straight by Sango. I do enjoy this story though I'm hoping Kag doesn't publish the boys dark pasts since she swore to never repeat. I'd feel too betrayed to forgive if someone did that, even if they changed names & left out some details

To be perfectly honest, I wasn't a huge fan of this chapter. The teasing scenes were good, but it almost seemed like the rest was written by someone else. I skimmed the section where you gave an overload of unnecessary details on the room Kag stumbled into. I top of that, I don't understand why she kept crying for no reason when she was made to seem so much stronger than that. Just wanted to give my honest feedback.

As soon as the fight started I knew Mat was going to happen upon it. Way to kick ass. The story has been pretty good so far though the only reason I know so much time has passed is because you comment once in awhile. I'm not sure how Mat has been in the school that long & not made male friends though. I'm assuming what Kikyo got at the ball was info on Kag/Mat?

I LOOOOVE IT! *tears *tears you are an amazing writing truly. :))

Great.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

The story's over... Poor lags had through hell jzt coz of a prank... I liked the whole undercover part... This storys quite good:thumbs up: XD _

Great Story!

Wow this is the best piece I have read in a long time! I loved it

I hope she learned a valuable lesson