without a doubt one of, if not the, best stories i have read on this site

yay!

You finished it!

Okay chop chop, time for the next one! Get to it!

PS, You are incredibly awesome!

Now I have time to read this again~ I started from the beginning once more, just to refresh my memory on what just happened. I'm really liking how this story is going along. The scene with Gly suddenly being afraid of Vexx after being hurt I thought was really done well and added to the tension~

The ending to this chapter with Vexx was real emotional you're really able to show the gentler side of him. I'm really liking all these characters, each one is unique! Can't wait to read the rest. Just wanted to give a review from what I've seen so far! _

Awesome chappy! And I love the title! :)

Oh, the suspense...

What is Vexx gonna do next?

I'm so excited!:D

Awesome chappy!

I could've comment the other chapters, but I was stuck on homework. :(

Wait, what if that's still Kiri, but she's under some sort of mind control like in the last chappy? *gasp*

Can't wait for the next one!

WHA! Looks like I can comment too despite not being a member! Awesome! The spice has arrived now! *Yay!*

It asks me to add in constructive critique inthis review so...

Personally, just to nit pick, I'd say you should double check you spellings frequently hun, I spotted one in the latest chapter and there has been just one or two in previous chapters. I'm nitpicking but...

Yes! Constructive critique! And support! You always have my support! *Waves a banner saying 'Fan'!*

Aww, Vexx was worried about Kiri. I can't wait to see what happens next, I'm so excited!

God Bless you!

I love Vexx!

He's so smexy! My precious!

Yay, two more updates!_

Who! You go, Kiri! Stand up to your father! _

Great chapters!_

heehee, Vexx thinks Kiri is beautiful!B3

He does have a soft spot for her!_

Holy shiznit!

update now. I mean it. Or I will take one of those dragons and set it on you!

Awesome you updated!

Your story keeps getting better and better with each chapter!

Can't wait for the next one. ;)

Nice one and was released so soon (it's so good when you can have chapters this quick ), as detailed as ever, as well as the omniscience, which gives always a good description on the characters' thoughts and feelings.

YAY! new chapter! Oh, Gina, this is so gratifying, and this new chapter is as great as the last ones, I don't see any difference in the way of writting, even knowing it has quite a time since you wrote last time.

And one more thing: while you're writting, keep in mind that I'll always be there to read the new chapter, sooner or later, because I'm a fan already .~

Good fic. Finally, someone that enjoys Vexx as much as I do.

It's interesting how you portray Vexx in this story, and I enjoyed your reference to the fact that Vexx doesn't speak once for the whole game. Personally, I don't think that you portrayed Vexx the way that I imagined him to be in the game, but it worked with what you were doing.

Another thing is that you have added a companion for Vexx. IMHO, Vexx should stay a lone wolf, but the way you wrote their teamwork cracked me up. I've always envisioned Vexx acting like a proper kid, instead of the complete awesome badass the game sees him as, and this fic has done it.

Please write more. This version of Vexx is enjoyable to no end, and how you portray him is hillarious. Keep up the good work.

P.S. I'm writing a Vexx fic myself, and I'm looking for a beta: if you're interested, e-mail me.