Toni didn’t know Dr Mallard and Gibbs at that point in the story. So being that Duck or Ducky is what people closer to him called him Toni would have called him Dr Mallerd.

Absolutely amazing way to bring tony onto the team

Really enjoyed 's a real shame you stopped writing.

This was great. Good, interesting case and I thought everyone was pretty in character. It could have totally happened this way! lol

This was the second time I've read this story all in one sitting and I enjoyed it just as much (or even more) as the last time! :-)

I enjoyed reading this story :)

Most enjoyable! I'm sorry you're not writing here anymore. Best wishes!-

You'll probably never read this, but I wanted to say how good this story is; I finished it in 2 days... I just wish you wrote more, cuz I love Tabby !

I like the way you write this. Nice work.
(BTW, we use flashlights in USA. Not that the grammar
was incorrect, but 'torch' is British I think.

A very belivable prequel. In the beginning the language felt a little "stodgy" but it cleaned up very fast and it turned into a very good and well written story.

I read this story for a second time and it is still as good as I remember it! I love the way you wrote your characters!

I must say, reading some of the fictions on here is.. quite depressing, they are all just bad spelling, no plots and character way out of..well character, but yours? well i was impressed. Not only did you make it interesting to read you also made it a mystery. For most of the story my money was on that jerk cop, Dan, and i was surprised, but happy when it wasn't. You stayed true to the character personality, though i was expecting a few movie references from Tony, a a bit more babble from Abbey, but you can't have everything i guess. I'm as much of tough critic as Gibbs is a boss, so out of ten stars, i give you..drum roll please..eight point seven, which in my books deserves a fairly large high five moment. Anyway, stay cool, keep writing, since you're obviously pretty good at it, and lastly don't let anyone put you down, you're a good writer, i know it, you know it, so don't let anyone make you feel less than you are..then again in saying that don't go getting cocky either, you're no Sir Conan Doyle just yet.

-Cheers mate!

I like the story. I love a spunky Tony who gets along with Abby, and Tony also gets along with Gibbs right away. Oh, and to top it off, they get the bad guys.

Haha, aww I love Tony! :D
This is a fantastic story and I adore it!
Absolutely perfect! ;) x

Great!