| Reviews for Jus Bellum |
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   Rori77 chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 This was lovely. Thank you |
| cthulhu-with-a-fez chapter 1 . 7/3/2017 HELP I HAVE FALLEN AND I CANNOT GET UP THANKS A BUNDLE FOR POKING MY POOR BELEAGUERED HEART WITH A STICK MADE OF PAIN AND PERSONAL REFLECTION |
| Nom de Plume chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 I have never described someone's writing in this way but your words carried a lot of strength - particularly that last line there. Very powerful and very true. I like how you segmented each of Kenshin's progressive life lessons and how you started each 'scene.' Hell, even your summary is beautiful and it encompasses your story perfectly. |
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 1/6/2013 No such thing as "the meaning of life." Everyone finds their own answers, or they don't. |
| Anonymous Reviewer-T chapter 1 . 5/12/2012 This is amazing. I love it! |
| junuca gaki chapter 1 . 10/13/2008 how wonderful. great job. |
| evilteddybear chapter 1 . 5/17/2008 Thank you for your time and effort! I'm very impressed by the...diction(?) of your drabble/fic. Generally when expressing only ideas and emotions without action authors tend to present their drabbles in a disorganized stream of consciousness. The organized, simplistic, way you presented your/Kenshin's thoughts and emotions made it easy to compare the different sections so your point came across clearly. The rythm(?) of the words and sentences gives it an almost poetic air. Besides that I love how you captured this essence of Kenshin's character, stripping the complicated concepts down to their bare bones, so that it seems simple and easily understood, while still being profound. Thank you again! I'm sorry if my review was repetitive, I'm having trouble expressing myself. Have fun, and keep writing, you have talent! |
| J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 1/14/2008 There it is in a nutshell. The entire arc of RK sums up nicely in your drabble. Nicely done. |
| kokoronagomu chapter 1 . 1/7/2008 drunken philosophy... surprisingly coherent. a pleasure, ginny |
| lmr666 chapter 1 . 11/2/2007 Beautiful. Moving. Just perfect. |
| Sakura Kaoru-Chan chapter 1 . 11/1/2007 nice |
| ola chapter 1 . 10/31/2007 quite nice. i think the shortness of those 3 little bits make them that much more poignant. |
| rose chapter 1 . 10/31/2007 very nice. great job. |
| sueb262 chapter 1 . 10/31/2007 This one raised the hairs on my arms as I read. Its tone is like the tolling of wisdom through the ages, and the particular examples are vivid and heart-breaking. I loved the structure: the three single summary sentences slice through the heart like a blade, and the final summation is powerful and True. Beautiful, beautiful work. |
| Fenikkusuken chapter 1 . 10/31/2007 Nicely done. As always, concise and insightful. |
