I have never cried so much while reading a story.
The last chapter broke my heart.
I hoped she would survive the whole time.
Still, the story was beautiful.

naw not my cup of any tea r coffee..you put in my heart she was dead,so changing will not do any good..so sorry you shudve never written she died ..this story wasn't worth my almost 2 days to read...

Alright, I bawled my eyes out last chapter because honesty who doesn't cry after reading that? This story is good, amazing in fact. If not for some grammar lapses and unnecessary a/n's in the middle of the chapters. Overall, it's a nice sasusaku experience. Although imo, I wish you didn't make a sad ending. It would have worked with the happy ending. The sad was ending was, well, sad. But yeah, thank you for giving us closure. Keep on writing! Especially we all know how canon they are right now.

AWE! Fantastic! I shall miss this story.

Oh my gosh! I knew it! But oh my gosh again, she died, and it was a sad but happy ending... and it was so touching! You nearly made me cry, so great job! I teared up a little bit... Throughout the story, it was very nicely written and the plot line was very interesting. I'd give you three and 1/2 stars, if I was ranking it out of 5 stars like a restaurant, but I'm not... so never mind. Great job though! It was amazing!

What? Okay, well that was very interesting. Nicely done!

My gosh, really? I hope that Sasuke lives in the end, though for some reason I have a feeling one character will die... Nicely done though!

WHAT?! No! How the heck... wrong words, why the heck would you do that?! I mean it hasn't happened yet, but still! NO! But great job, it was enticing and drama packed.

Ah, nice!

Oh wow, that was... what's the word?... Exciting perhaps, but more than that... oh, thrilling! Great job!

EEEKK! As my friend would squeal... but OMG! YAY! I'm so happy he actually found her! This should get even better now. Nicely done!

Awe, that was so sad! The poor thing! Excellent job though, it was very well written.

Wow, the poor guy, and girl, but mostly guy. Why must Ino seem to ruin everything? I mean seriously, in the anime, fanfictions, and probably the manga, she just ruins things for Sakura. I'm not really complaining, since the chapter was really great! Um, nicely done!

NO! Why must you end on such a cliff hanger?! Though it was very good, and I'm not going to mention errors, I just did, sorry, it ended on a bad note, so I must read before I am driven 'insane' with not knowing what is going to happen. Nicely done!

I find it interesting how you say you were originally going to end a chapter in the middle of it then you kept going because you wanted to, and yet the chapters are so long already. It is rather amusing though. Nicely done!