Dude.. could'nt you write with a little more Grammar mistakes. seriously, if you wanna write, then please, put your effort in it. Else thr thing just comes up too damn incomprehensible.

I hope you update this soon.

cool story

That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)(can you Plz add Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Anko, Hana, Tayuya, Tenten, and Temari to Naruto's Harem)

Seems you mixed something up.

“Get off my back already! I’m doing my best!” shouted the shinobi, obviously not in the mood for criticism from her, not after he had missed lunch because of order to report to the Hokage.

“Your best isn’t good enough! You expect my niece to learn Taijutsu when she comes from a clan that specializes in Genjutsu! This is unacceptable!” responded the crimson eyed Jounin.

Isn't Yuuhi Sumire,Kurenai's niece,Jounin sensei Houyoku Shinka and not Ginshin?

not bad good fic.. but it seems like your forcing yourself to do too much at once.. by creating a bunch of ocs and then adding more anti bijus. The last half of this chapter was exteremly hard to read through and I had to force myself to finish.. Overall not bad.

Awesome chapter.

I'd say not to rush the development and do it gradually for them all

Way too many original characters.

HEY DUDE! WHAT THE HELL! WHEN ARE YOU...OR ARE YOU EVER...GOING TO UPDATE ICHA ICHA ENGAGMENTS! SERIOUSLY MAN! IM DYING OVER HERE! NOW DO IT BEFORE I LOSE IT AND SEND ITACHI TO KILL YOU!...or anko...i cant really dcide which one i scarier...

hey great story but i have a question about that green haired girl is she supposed to be the seven tailed jinchurikki because her name is fuu and she lives in waterfall( i am asking this because there r not that many fic's about her)

welcome back, great chapter

Honestly the whole bit about another set of Bijuu like creatures is one small step too far. Other than that, it was alright.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

fem. Haku & Hinata should be in Naruto's harem along with Yugito & Temari.

hey,i like this story,keep up the good up and put more,i want to read what happens next!i like seika very much!put her with naruto please!update soon!