This is just too beautiful. I just love how you paint all of these abstract pictures into a powerful one-shot. It's not Gilmore Girls. I can't exactly see it as an episode of Gilmore Girls, but it's a writing that is so beautiful that I couldn't mind to be bothered by how different from Gilmore Girls it is. Thank you for writing it.

You are amazing. That's all I need to say.

This is amazing. And beautiful.

Its just perfect!

Oh my.

I almost don't want to leave a review because I'm fairly certain my words simply won't do yours justice.

I love, love, love that you quote T. S. Eliot.

"and he didn't know what to say so he closed his fingers around On the Road and he gunned the engine and decided to chase the sun."

Never stop writing.

So I said I might not review again because it would just be the same words and compliments just in different order but I read this and for the first time, you made me heart want to rip out of my chest. The whole time I was like "He'll leave, she'll leave, their fantasy will end, it just has to" but at the end, you know it's real this time and they're ready. And that made me feel so good, I had to say something.

You're seriously too good. You own the one-shot.

Also, "This is all I wanted. To stand at the sea with you," is a fantastic line.

Also, again, I enjoyed the playfulness between them. It wasn't so heavy. There was a lightness that felt right, like an escape.

Made me cry.

Lovely! Beautiful! And so Literati! :)

Loved it all, especially the "I love you" scene ..

oh wow this was beautiful. i would usually pick out a line i liked best...but i really couldn't. this was amazing.

This was beautiful. Your poetic language was wonderful in this story. It felt so almost-sad all the way through that I was preparing myself for a heartbreaking ending. Really glad I didn't get one!

this was absolutely amazing. its one of those stories that while you're reading it kind of makes your chest tighten. idk i just get that feeling when i read something i really love.

That was amazing. Your word choices were perfect. It was very deep, sad, and amazing.

That was beautiful.

Simply and utterly beautiful.

-Lani

That was different. A unique style. I liked it.

“Come on Rory, you brought it up for a reason. Do you want me to scratch it into my back until it scars? You can see it all over me, Rory. You can see it everywhere. What the hell else do you want?”

Amazing line. Just amazing.