This was beautiful. I'm very glad I read it and stayed with it all the way through! I'm still a little confused with his relationship with Bill but I really loved that you included such a close relationship between Bill, Charlie, and Harry. I dont come across that group as close friends very often in fanfiction and appreciate it. You did a wonderful job thank you!

If I say this story changed me, do I lose points for cheesiness? I feel like I've been walking in a fog while reading it. The deep POV of Snape gives the story something haunting. Two completely empty souls not filling each other up, but helping each other stand on their own. It was beautiful. The fact you're not a native English speaker doesn't show often, and those grammatical errors were easy to read over. Thanks for the story. It was beautiful.

I really don't know how I could skip over your fic for all these years. I never read it. Why? I don't know. My loss, really, but I'm happy I found it now. I love your style. Your Snape is epic even if your Harry is perhaps a little... Too much. Just a tiny bit too much. But your miserable, desperate fic was so deep that I think I can forgive a powerful! Harry. You end your story with a great hope. We can think all will go well. It's good for the soul. I think you deserved more, many more reviews. Perhaps your style is not so linear and discouraged some readers. I loved it. Thank you for your great effort. You gave me a few days of oblivion from my boredom. Now I am going to peruse the rest of your hp fics. I hope I could convey my meaning without embarrassing myself. I'm Italian and my English is mostly self learned reading some thousand fics...

It is for sure one of the best snarry I have ever read. But you know what? I am disappointed that there is more between Bill and Harry written than Snarry itself. I felt cut from the story, maybe that is on purpose this cliff-hanger yet I crave some sequel, something ordinary and intimate with you can easily say goodbye after that level of emotions you brouht from me. Something more about Draco and Voldemort and some happy-end or death, anything really, but more! OK, perhaps I get addicted, your fault, don't worry :) Thanks a lot, 'cause I had great time with them and surely I will come back to the story many times again. Great piece of art, and very, very beautiful written I love it!

Well... I have yet to find a story, particularly Snarry of your level and I'm trying really hard to find one! Because apparently your story has made me obsessed with the pairing, with Snarry and I just can't stop reading! But not one story I've found can come even close to it and I'm dying for another like this! Could you help me somehow? :/ ;)

Firstly, I commend you for writing a story from Snape's point of view, though it's AU from HBP, still Snape is Snape and attempting to write his thought process is an accomplishment in itself. The story is beautifully written, dark yet painfully beautiful.
These being said, the story would've been perfect if not for Metamorphosis At Dawn and its additional plotline here, I was sceptical about reading MAD and wish I hadn't because this twist is really twisted rather in a creepy way...
But that hardly ruins the beauty of this one and I really enjoyed it very much! :)

You should at least warn people if your going to do snape bashing...or rude and disresectful and arrogant draco and harry granted the first 2 has always been true about both of them in cannon

Ooh i Love your story. Truly this is the third Time i have read it and it does Not cease to be a fabulous story

Hey! I really liked your work, and I would like to ask you for permission to use it in a Russian-language source. I hope for your approval!

you are very talented

I loved this story. Way differnt from what I usually read but so compelling.

Wow... Over one hundred thousand words building up to this chapter, and it was absolutely perfect.

I applaud you, this story, and I give you a heartfelt encore, as I know I will be returning to this story once more.

Thank you for taking the time to write this work of art.

Bravo!

God. Both this story and it's short companion are so heartfelt and beautiful. The characters evolved in such a realistic way that at times I had tears in my eyes and at others I felt like punshing some of these wizards for their stupidity. I was especially touched by the scene where Severus couldn't stand by any longer and watch the Harry pretend to be in any state to comfort anyone else.

Thank you for sharing this incredible work with us.
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Words can't express how much I'm loving this story.

Awsome!