Wow, that was truly great. I love how you conveyed Anko's perspective about a complex situation. This bond between the student and the teacher has many facets, and you managed to show just that. Brilliant!

"To everyone else, it looked normal, but inside there was always something terribly wrong."

I absolutely love this line!

Wonderful, wonderful job! ]

That was so cool!

Sorry about the lameness, I cant think lately...

This is truly intense and defining of Anko's relationship with Orochimaru. Good job.

No need to say sorry if people are creeped!

OroAnk in general is a complex relationship (in every aspect of them).

good write,

I liked the general flow. :]

Nice littel blurb on Anko's perspective. It's kind of hard to follow at points, but I think I get the general idea. Poor Anko.

I liked it, it was nice take on Anko and Orochimaru. keep it up.

Yo!

Another great oneshot! HEHE

For me it's not creepy, it's just plain simple... he took her as genin when no one cared for her. So she reacted like any other child, she clung to him! HEHE

She's not to blame for the fact that he was a criminal and a S-class criminal!

Cheers