Reviews for I Live On |
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BROCKLESNER chapter 19 . 3/9 WTF(WHAT THE FUCK)! Why Are So Many People Against The Romantic Pairing Of Ichigo And Neliel(Nel)? I Love The Romantic Pairing Of Ichigo And Neliel(Nel)! For/In/On Bleach The Romantic Pairing Of Ichigo And Neliel(Nel) Is My Favorite Romantic Pairing For/Involving Ichigo! |
pepejohn chapter 1 . 11/9/2019 This is a pain to read. I can't stand harems since they TEND to read like this. Painful self-insert masturbation fic Yikes |
Hanstag chapter 26 . 9/5/2019 Wait, you're from NZ? Man, I suddenly feel so proud your a kiwi |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 9 . 9/4/2019 Come on! We want more LEMONS! |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 5 . 9/4/2019 Why does everyone mix up his name! Its hiruzen sarutobi and sarutobi is his surname! You call him hiruzen not sarutobi! |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 4 . 9/4/2019 Oh come on! Eight girls is pushing it. It would have been better if you stuck with your original five or maybe even four. I really hate these harem type things that fanfic authors have going on where all the girls essentially turn into cum dumpsters for the main character. I mean srsly. You are not even going to be able to get enough character buildup with this many girls. You are going to basically ruin the story. No girl likes to share their bf with that many girls and it's a pain in the ass to maintain that many girls. Sigh... |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 2 . 9/4/2019 A nodachi as his bankai would be cooler... |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 1 . 9/4/2019 I think your selection is the best though maybe yoruichi instead of tatsuki? |
theangrychef chapter 6 . 8/28/2019 Got stupid |
Jay J chapter 34 . 6/18/2019 Your Fan-fic is amazing such exquisite writing skills,plot and execution. You have a great mind I just can't wait for the next chapter for you are truly a one of a kind author and you'd do wonders if you were to publish these books in paper-back, that is if you haven't already done it. You manage to incorporate Bleach and Naruto so well, as you kept Naruto and Sasuke's rivalry going with Madara's hate towards Naruto and still kept the plot in Bleach...You really are amazing |
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 5 . 5/17/2019 Don't hate on hinata. The reason it seems like there is more room for imagination is because people don't use their imagination even they write her in usually. It's the author's fault not the pairing. Technically any pairing can work if you have the skills. |
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 1 . 5/17/2019 The title makes me want to write a parody of an old rap song I heard of... I can hardly wait to see what the rest of the story will inspire |
SeriphXIII chapter 34 . 3/12/2019 This story is great and I would love to see it continue, a work of art |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2018 THIS IS ASSSSSS |
addindanishah93 chapter 34 . 8/29/2018 I am hoping that you will continue this story even though it's been along time |