I am really enjoying this story, A LOT! I really hope that Charlie is able to recover and stop drinking. For both his and Bella’s sake. Renée is awful, I hope Bella can recover from her neglect. It would serve Renée right if Her baseball player husband leaves her for a younger woman.

Good story so far... And good writing style. But I've noticed in both this and 'Meyer university', that you keep missing a lot of words in the sentences. If you do a thorough read through before posting I'm sure you'll catch these errors. It's as if your mind going way ahead of your pen...

love this!
no offence but you could have done better!
love it though!

hilarious!

This was a great story, love it

This chapter11 was great

why have bella give away her feeling whislt asleep? it seems tohappen in every freaking story on here! and I fuking hate it...in every story

Sad, so sad.

Still reading and enjoying what I'm reading :-)

Renee is somewhat selfish in this or at least that my first impression. Sound like Bella has more funds available to play with in this so I'm guessing she'll be driving a flash car and not the old beat up truck.
Reading on :-)

I swear this is beautiful! I love it! I'm looking for more stories from you this minute!

This is the second time I've read this and I thought I would let you know that you write the relationship between Bella and Edward much better than Meyer did. Bella has a freaking backbone in this for crying out loud! And Edward actually teases her instead of just being an icy, overprotective...weirdo, for lack of a better word. So kudos to you, dear.

Thanks for an entertaining story.

You are very good at this. So far, I'm loving it.

Really amazing story.
I love it.
And car racing was amazing..;)