I can't say that I'm crying over this, yet I can say it kept my attention.

asdfghjkl the feels man!

I loved how you wrote the three POV's on this story, very creative! I also liked that you included that little memory of Braig and little Kairi, that was cute!

Hey! This made me cry, but why can't my stupid phone see Chapter 2? It's just 'Chapter 2- Harmony' then just blank! What the heck? ...And I was really looking forward to reading that...

That was so sad. Now even Xigbar is part of the tragedy... Nice job on this.

This was an excellent retelling in a different perspective! Same as last time, it was as if it might have actually happened!

That was a really good story! It was as if it could actually have happened! Everyone was in character, and I loved Demyx's explanation of his having a heart. Excellent job.

*sadly; longingly* Oh Braig...if only the events of Birth by Sleep had not occured, Braig...

...oh Braig...:( Still, quite an excellent chapter, alibet extremely unexpected. It was masterfully composed, flowed well, and all of his reactions and relations with the characters (past and present) were remarkable and true.

I liked best what Xigbar added when he spoke with Kairi at the end, when you added that when it did not show in the first chapter.

Sincerely,

Thank you.

This chapter was an excellent follow-up to the last one, this being in Demyx's perspective really...well, put the story in perspective, without another way to put it.

I like the mysterious guesture of Luxord when he called Kairi "Namine" and offered the coloring set. Before, I had simply thought it was Demyx being kind but a bit mischiveious, but now...well, I do like Luxord.

Still though...I like the way you write for Demyx. It is a very true, "possible canon" style. I really appreciate styles like that.

I wonder what content could make up the third chapter...

Oh...aw...how...sad...

oooh, but so well written. I must congratulate you, this seems very interesting, and yet only the first chapter. Still, this will be a rather unique story, being only 3 pages and yet still so interesting so far.

Great story. It was really well written, and the way you wrote in 3 different POV to link Kairi, Demyx and Xigbar was very original. You got their personalities perfectly.

And you made me cry too :P. Great work!

Aw! *tear* the little twist at the end was great.

This was amazing.

:D

Faved!

-Nekozawa

D'aw

STOOPID SORA

DX

It's great how you made 3 different POVs. The part at the end of Demyx's POV about the Dancers made me d'aw even moar.

This was very sad but I enjoyed it very much! Kairi's possible interaction with the organisation members was interesting. Out of the organisation I quite liked Demyx, he seemed like a good person despite being on the side of the 'bad guys'. Anyway it's always nice to read more in depth about a character and it reminded me of how I felt during the game that I wish Sora understood more about what he was doing when he cleared the entire organisation. Maybe Roxas should've spoke up inside of him! XD

very well written i hope you write more. I liked how you made Kairi Ansem the Wise's daughter :) very original