Reviews for Weightless |
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![]() ![]() I don't think your first ending sucked it was just depressing and you know how everyone likes a happy ending. When they see a happy ending it takes their mind off the fact that they will probably never have a happy ending like that. So don't get too hurt over the comments. But also don't be rude to the commenters just ignore or block them. |
![]() ![]() I Lost All Hope For This Story. I Feel So Empty Like This Story Was Ment To Crush Our Hearts. … |
![]() ![]() On chapter 31 I was crying. Like a waterfall. On chapter 32 you could hear me say “KAWAII!” |
![]() ![]() ![]() sad depressing and hart braking |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter I fell happy for inuyasha |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter poor kagome |
![]() ![]() ![]() great I love it this chapter flows nicely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wooooooow i loved iiiiit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read your story and personally I liked the original ending. I enjoyed the story and thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this story was really great. I loved it a lot. I get it if you didn't want a happy ending, but the original ending was just 'It was all a dream. Going back to class. The End.' And I was like, "What the heck, you can't end something like that!" It was a great story but making it all a dream at the end kinda wasn't great. And that has nothing to do with the fact that it wasn't happy. I mean everything was escalating and then... DREAM. Why! This unhappy ending could have been pretty great. To be honest with you, I just skimmed over the alternate ending. I liked the original, it just could have been much better. It really kind of sucks that Kagome is at this institution with everyone for so long, and so much happens, and then in three seconds it's all just a dream at the end. It would've been a better sad ending if it hadn't been a dream. Despite all this, the whole story was great until the end, where it was just a little good. I'll look to see what other stories you have if I haven't already. |
![]() ![]() WHAT PEOPLE SAY THAT THIS STORY IS BAD?! I LOVE THIS STORY AND IF ANYONE SAYS THEY HATE IT I WILL PERSONALLY *&%&(*$%&* THEM! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a difficult concept. Eating disorders are so real. I love your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a little confused about the ending. Did Kagome turn out to be fat? Even though I love happy endings, this ending was exceptional. It was a good story. The people who flamed you need to realize you did put the story under tragedy. That was a warning itself :P Good job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() In a way, saying it was all a dream is rather... Preposterous. I mean, how an he dream about inuyasha, sango and miroku if she never met them? So the alternate ending is better :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg omg omg! THIS IS FREAKIN AMAZING! I LOVE IT! I'm now ur new BIGGEST fan! |