Oh, this is delightful, and more creepy than horrifying. Haruhi is living the creepy, creepy dream and doesn't even know how fragile the world the world around her is, that her life would become a horrorshow should she ever become self-aware.

That was AMAZING!

Great story, I really liked it, keep it up! :)

...that was sexy. XD

I like the idea of this story of yours; very original and unique. A little bit confusing but highly entertaining to read. I do honestly think that both characters are OOC, however, it's not bad as those kinds of OOC's who are... well, uh... yuck-ily, sweetly characterized. OOC in just the right amount. Awesome concept and awesome writing style. /faved

Wow... this was incredibly believable. You write them both very well. D

Oh, and very fluffy fic. Veddy fluffy. xD

Damn... Very nice work on this. Keep at it.

Damn, what a story. Easily one of the best one-shots I have ever read. Too bad nowadays these Haru/Kyon oneshots are pretty lame.

I liked this one, and I agree with most of the reviews.

The thing I liked the most was Haruhi's actual wish. It wasn't anything to change Kyon's feelings, but only that he was truthful about them. It speaks volumes about what he did.

I think that he really is about the only person who could shut her up like that. It's one of the very few ways she would actually lose her train of thought and not be able to get back on the rails again. Nicely done.

Nice...MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE.

I liked the story and its not told by kyon's view...but I got confused a little cause I was looking for kyon's thing :D

you should write a sequel to that sory or something it was excellent

Kyon was so out of character but at the same time he was. But I dont know, I think if he ever realized he liked her that he would do something jsut like that. I know his kind, hell I am his kind so I know how he would act and from past experences (right down to some crazy bossy girl that I have to keep from destroying the world) that a certian moment comes when a person like him will act completely oppisite like that.

Awsome story, I liked it, simple but very good.

Me like. :)

Write more! Haruhi commands it.

Yay! FINALLY a story that was not told from Kyon's point of view! It got kind of annoying after a while. Good job I liked it! HaruKyon4ever!

I make it my duty to reveiw every story I read, unless it is absoloutly crap and I can't bear to read it ever again because it is so bad.

But uh, this was great! I wish I could make more than one community~ etc.

I couldn' find anything wrong with the grammar or the spelling. No typo's, mistakes and everything seemed IC.

*salute*

I've been making my way steadily through the Melancholy H.S. fanfic section here, and this fic was one of the highlights. I like the characterization, and the general concept. I'd love to see the idea written in a longer, more detailed story where you really play around with the characters and ramifications, but even in short-fic form it's solid. You wrote the balance between Kyon's attraction and discomfort very well. He was being OOC, but his reaction to that OOC behavior felt IC.

I liked this whole exchange:

“Well, anyways, I might as well let you know that since I woke up this morning, I can’t seem to get you out of my head.” He said it, not as a romantic declaration, but merely as one commenting on a particularly dreary weather forecast.

“Oh, and is that different than normal!” she taunted.

“Today I felt unavoidably compelled to tell you.” He sounded positively miserable about the whole thing.