Wow...that sure was intense. Good story, I liked it. I kinda felt bad for the therapist though...having to deal with Envy and his shit.

That was majestic as fuck.

THTS IT?! I want more! I like this story please make more of it.

The secondary ending is definetly the better of the two.

That was one of the more... tense chapters of this story. I kept waiting for Lust to drag Envy out screaming and then I was waiting for Envy to make a slip up while talking to Ed

I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say that "eric" is either envy or one of the other homonculi, right? And if he isn't man is he creepy!

Man Ed took that better than I would've. I'd freak out and try hitting or kicking Envy. Yes I caught the foreshadowing though wouldn't Lusts coment on them helping Envy and him not realizing it yet also be an example of foreshadowing? * sigh* I hate language arts.

Well this chapter was very amusing, but I don't get why Mustang cares so much about what Ed s working on he usually doesn't give a crap and let's Edward do whatever he wants as long as it doesn't get him in trouble.

Best scene of this caliber I've read in a long time. Loved it! Loving the story too.

Dahicadbjkacdacdkjbcdabjkdcakhukhace this story is amazinggggg

You're a great writer!

SHIP IT SHIP SHIP SHIP man I hate you guys on FF for making me ship the weirdest pairings

I reallyyy like this ending way more since it's wayy happier :) I do think that the other does fit into the actual show more but this is fan FICTION and I loved the alternate ending better :D

This was simply so bueatiful I cried a little at the end, ilike the alternate ending because it's a bit more happy i love you man! your writing is so good thank you for this amazing story! THANK YOU!

FinallyfinallyfinallyFINALLY ! An incrediable EdVy fic! God that was amazing! Perfect length, meaning both the length of the entire story and the length of the chapters. EXTREMELY well written! You're definitely a serious writer!

This was the best EdVy story I've read so far. Ed and especially Envy were in character throughout the entire story which must have been a challenge considering how twisted Envy is. All the psychological 'games' between Ed and Envy were just so well written! I loved it! It was so intriguing and angsty but, also fun and twisted. Loved the smut angle. It didn't just feel like random smut scenes for the readers.

The first ending seemed more realistic I guess but I'm really not a fan of depressing endings...I'm a sap! I can't help it! Which is why I LOVE THE ALTERNATE ENDING! Yay! Ed's gonna help Envy! Envy may eventually return Ed's feelins! Yay! * cough*makeasequel*cough * but seriously I agree with the reviewer who said something about Envy and Ed teaming up and bringing down Dante! Down with the worlds biggest bitch! Gosh I hate her...

Thanks for writing and hope to see more EdVy stories at some point! *Favorites* *Follows Author* ;D

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Ms.T-P