This is pretty good. I was surprised, to be honest. The rhyming tone at first made me skeptical, but you pulled it off nicely and by the end I rather enjoyed it. This story could do with some tightening up, though. Maybe if you redid, looked it over, and tried again, it could be even better. With a few alterations I think it could be great.

I find this short story rather emotional. I also like your choice of words. The way you described it was so unique. I enjoyed reading it. You bring truth to the movie. I like that.

I quite enjoyed that. This is a perfect example of an awesome little story without any dialogue, simply because dialogue was not necessary. Good job.

o! that must have been terribly tough to write. Poetry always is, but you wrote it with such grace! *Applause* Please keep up with you fics. I would hate to miss any of this!

Beautiful. A wonderous fanfiction. Very original and stunning. Here's to a very talented poet.

this shows real promis i absolutely love the love story between coulmier and madelaine so passionate but yet so innocent i would love to read any future quills stories you may wish to write in the future

this was the best story i have ever read on the web. it was so sad and good please write more. i loved how it flowed sort of Shakespeare like plese keep writing. wonderful. bravo. encore.

that was very original...it had a great rhythym to it the whole time, sort of like a poem :)

You summed that movie up so perfectly and rich with poetry. Ever thought of

being a lyracist?

A genuinely touching, excellently crafted piece. You have a real eye for rhythm and language...wonderful!

Wow. Great rhymes and all; nice!