Wonderful! Simple and to the point.

Love it!I feel a little bad for Sasuke though, but I love how he realized that Naruto would do anything for him and always catch him when he falls!

Wow :O Your writing skills are amazing! I loved it!

wow
im really impressed, i really really liked it!
i like the fact that he knows he's gonna surrender at the end
very very good job :)

'TWAS MIGHTY GOOD.

I'm left with mixed emotions about Sasuke's. I mean it's obvious he loves Naruto, but he's scared to lose him, so it's hard to keep loving him.
This was really good, the 2nd person writing style really pulled me in. too.

Plz continue!

This was kind of beautiful. I really love your style of writing!
Sincerely,
Blue
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~Sasuke Uzumaki 83

this is a wonderful story. I loved it how you described sasuke - so in charakter... he is such a proud, sad and fragile charakter who never learned that to love someone is a wonderful thing - it hurts yes but it also brings happiness... I hope he will realize that he loves naruto..and someday really stay the morning after... :-) and let naruto see his true self. you are a very talented writer. really.

Wow, this is really well written (and saddening).

This story was Interesting and unique. I liked it!

XD

Very nice, although I'm not sure if second person writing is allowed on FFnet... It's a nice piece though, and very unique

This was honestly touching. I really, really love your style and how well everything was thought out.

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Really good. This is most likely how Sasuke would think about things. He's so complicated.