Reviews for Untouched
knowelspole chapter 1 . 1/2/2018
This was wonderfully beautiful and well written. I loved the way you stepped through the game's story!
Thank you for writing such a great fic!
Of Space and Time chapter 1 . 10/3/2017
It's been years since I've read this story and I am happy to report that in my eyes it still holds up so wonderfully!
Donawhale chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Amazing!
OPrincess ShinigamiO chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
This is... so beautiful ;,)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
I had forgotten how much I liked this. The ebb and flow, the imagery, the way my senses alight with joy from your well-chosen words... it's like poetry in prose, and captures the nuances of the most beautiful pairing. Well written, friend.
thedeepbluesky chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
OMG! This is so sad and beautiful :S
Archangel Lucas chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
C'est Magnifique! I cannot possibley express how beautiful this piece was. From start to finish I was hooked, every romantic bone in my body in rapture of this awe-inspiring walkthrough of the love that is Cleris/Clorith. I felt as if I was there with them through every moment, every touch that meant more than any words they could have spoken. Do not listen to the critics who put this down, they have not a passionate bone in them if this didn't touch them. I encourage you to write more with your gift.
Jitaeri chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
That was more beautiful than anything I could ever imagine.
Kp-awesome-starplayer chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
I just wanted to say that I think ur really talented. U r intelligent and I think that u will be one of the minds of tomorrow that will spark the interest of thousands to come. Ur words speak in an artistic way that is new and fresh and u have painted a picture of what love is. You've captured the hearts of many with this heartwarming subplot. I really wanted to cry when I read this. Even though cloud never really got to tell aeries how he felt about her, this piece has given me one shred of hope that he cares for her that no one understands. As u can probably tell I'm a huge final fantasy vii fan and a cleris fan as well. Thank u so much for giving me the opportunity to read one of the most beautiful poems in the world from one of God's blessings given to earth. U should definitely keep up the extraordinary work as you progress through school. Don't throw away this special gift that u have. Cherish it as though it were all u had left in the world. Good luck, and I hope to c more cleris poems or novels of ur in the future. God bless :)
Lexicer chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
I love this story.

It was so emotional and cute!

I read this in the middle of the night, and I was practically blinking away tears. I NEVER CRY!

After reading this I decided that I wanted to wallow in my sadness so I searched YouTube for emotional Cloud and Aerith videos.

In spite of all this wallowing, it was a very good night.

Thank you for making my night fun...in an intereting way. o.O

If that makes sense. :P
idkwhattodowiththis chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
That one-shot was cute and fun to read; I just love this couple so much and I love how you described the two. 3
Anime-Romancer777 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Beautiful! I cried listening to the song 'Skin' while reading this. But it was so touching. Faving!
Aerisx chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
O_O AMAZING! AWESOME! I SO WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT! X3
A Fan chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
I was really bored once I few months ago after I had beaten Final Fantasy VII, and I was browsing around on this site when I came across this story. I read it and loved it. And now, at least four months later, I thought of it again, remembering specific scenes and how good they were. I reread it, and enjoyed it even more. Everything is perfect about this story.
miamijuggler chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Wow.

This was really beautiful.

I'm usually not a fan of "snapshot" fics, but I really like the way you've strung these together. I would write more, but it's late, and I can't think clearly.

I really, REALLY liked it, though. In fact, I believe I'm favoriting it. So there :).

Really good job.

I hope to read more from you in the future.
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