Reviews for Kept Secret |
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FFFG chapter 6 . 4/8/2018 That was cute. Flashback central, but cute. The little subplot with Naruto and Sasuke was okay, mostly for the entertainment value of Iruka manhandling Sasuke into divulging his feelings. Otherwise it was, well, cute. I really liked when Kakashi found out Iruka was Hisoka and instead of saying anything just flat out ran away. Very in-character for that dork. Thank you for writing. KTN |
violetpooka chapter 6 . 7/12/2015 yeah-loved this one even more the second (third?) time i read it... |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/20/2014 Yay! Another great read! |
jj chapter 6 . 9/12/2013 very nice I like this story |
Kunohichi8 chapter 2 . 6/18/2013 i love kakairu |
Go Go Bear chapter 3 . 11/23/2012 Darn it, I'm typing this on my phone & accidentally hit submit. Anyway, you often write loose when you mean lose. Also, Godaime does not have an "n" (you keep writing Gondaime which is incorrect). One last repeat mistake: you always write "later" instead of "latter." So yeah, the plots are fun but those things over & over were starting to get to me hahaha. |
Go Go Bear chapter 2 . 11/23/2012 Hmm... I've read a few of your Naruto fics now & this one is shaping up to be fun like the others. However, you have a few repeated mistakes in every fic that are driving me a bit mad lol. "Lose" only has one "o" (since "loose" means "to be slack" |
Angel of Light chapter 6 . 7/9/2012 Love it. _ poor kakashi and his dream. But it worked out nicely |
BlackWolf202 chapter 6 . 5/23/2011 Maaa, I loved it! ;D |
BlackWolf202 chapter 5 . 5/23/2011 Sexy classroom scene! *faintly* Woo... *promptly dies of blood loss* |
BlackWolf202 chapter 4 . 5/23/2011 *steals chapter and runs into cave* precious preEecious! its mine all mine! nyahahahahaha! |
BlackWolf202 chapter 3 . 5/23/2011 Woohoo! He got the pipe! Lolz As usual i LOVED it! |
BlackWolf202 chapter 2 . 5/23/2011 This. Is gonna be good! *evil smirk* |
BlackWolf202 chapter 1 . 5/23/2011 ! I knew it! ;3 |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/7/2011 looove it. |