Reviews for More Than Mosquitoes |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2015 Oh goodness, I thought its was adorable. |
batwayne chapter 1 . 7/8/2013 loved it :D |
LionshadeSC chapter 1 . 7/31/2012 oh ho ho xD i see how he did that. i see whats goin on here xp excellently written, thank you so much for sahring with us this oneshot! :D |
PleaseDeleteThisAccount123455 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012 so cute |
Billie the fourth sage chapter 1 . 12/26/2011 I'M TOUCHED 3 And okay, that line was perfect. |
Aleego chapter 1 . 11/12/2011 This story made me smile :) Very nice! |
Daki92 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011 Short and interesting, good combination for the reader of today |
Green Ruby chapter 1 . 6/29/2010 That was a good story. Peace Dude! |
RedBlueGreen chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 Briliant interactions here, they're both right in character and convincing. The lines: “We have something, right?” “What, you mean besides an abundance of insects?” are particularly sharp, and the mosquito at the end ounds off the motif perfectly well. You would think they'd have a mosquito net in a jungle lair, and that the world's graditude would be more concrete too. (Mind you, a global pardon is quite something.) |
Sonny Day chapter 1 . 5/17/2008 More Than Mosquitos seems the right title. I really liked this story, though I would have expected them to get more reward for the world-saving. The characters were swiftly and descriptively drawn. |
Zorian chapter 1 . 4/8/2008 Great post-graduation fic. Not many but one of the few that I read that are great. |
Girl With The Cauldron Spirit chapter 1 . 1/5/2008 It was elaborate without being preachy, and I really could imagine the characters on the show speaking through your fic,. I especially liked the "we have something, right?' part. Very well done. I really like this couple, because you really don't know what will happen, and the ambiguity of the fic really emphasizes that. |
manytwos chapter 1 . 9/9/2007 Very cutesy, you know I'm only at season 2 of Kim Possible eps and I already see a hint of this... this little "something" as the author said. Wonderfully entertaining piece. |
Dark's Soul Mate chapter 1 . 9/8/2007 This was very, very good! You kept the characters completely in-character, and I could actually hear their voices when they spoke in the story. I think that if the KP series continued, this or something close to this would happen. Very nice job! ~Dark's Soul Mate |
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 9/8/2007 Nice job here. Keep the good writing. |