Reviews for Defying Fate |
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Hallow chapter 6 . 10/13/2018 Strange how you're still updating Bleach stories but haven't done anything with this one in over 10 years. My favorite chapter has to be the alternate rendition of the Nnoitra fight and Neliel's reveal. Namely in how cold, hard, and logically Nel acts, recognizing her impaired condition and getting Orihime to heal her ASAP in a frustrated and almost panicked desperate/begging voice. The interactions with Grimmjow, questioning about loyalties to Aizen, and hollow-like references to sucking out souls were all icing on the cake. At this point, I wouldn't care if you decided to rewrite this story so long as you keep the scenes I mentioned relatively unchanged. Maybe look at fanfics like "To Find the Heart", "White", and "Ichigo Awakens" for inspiration? Best of luck to you for whatever you do! |
demonavenger888 chapter 6 . 3/18/2018 please update again its been years |
Brenda293 chapter 6 . 12/12/2014 At least the Hueco Mundo is more elaborate ,and that 's nice .But my question issue ,are you gonna continue this story ? And if the answer is yes ,would you consider to add some romance between Rukia and Ulquiorra . Because they are the two face of a coin , they both are 4th seats and they have personal revenge against Aizen .But mostly if you let them meet I think they would be more fun than an Ichi x Ruki (too obvious) or an Ulqui x Nel (nothing new) or a Ruki x Ren (too easy ) .Till then , Happy Holidays . |
Brenda293 chapter 5 . 12/12/2014 I cannot wait .Next chapt . |
Brenda293 chapter 4 . 12/12/2014 Oh boy ,that was a smart move to make Ichigo level up here . But to be honest with you David, I don't know what to think about Tatsuki .Sure Ichigo will get another pair of hand to help . First was him then , Orihime ,Chad , Uryu and now Tatsuki that make a lot of people,I think . |
Brenda293 chapter 3 . 12/12/2014 Awesome ! And I 'm not saying that just to been nice .Between the canon version of Neliel and your version there's not thinking ,your 's is the best . |
Brenda293 chapter 2 . 12/12/2014 Wow ! That 's exactly what Ulquiorra should have figure out in the here come another question .By killing himself should not Ulqui normally turn to ashes ? |
Brenda293 chapter 1 . 12/12/2014 I totally agree with this version .How Rukia actually defeated Aaronierro was rather suspicious .Though that doesn't mean she's weak what puzzle me is ,if Rukia should have a Bankai will her source of power be Nejibana or rather Sode No Shirayuki ? |
River Jaeger chapter 6 . 10/5/2010 This is such an interesting AU! I especially love what you did with Rukia and Nejibana! Please update! |
HollowSanity chapter 6 . 7/5/2010 This is a great story. Probally one of the best i ever read. I hope you update soon! |
Anonymous chapter 6 . 7/4/2010 Please continue. So far this seems more interesting than the direction the actual manga's gone in. |
AlaeaMori chapter 6 . 11/11/2009 it is a shame you have not continued this, it is very promising |
Drake G. Reaper chapter 6 . 8/5/2009 Awesome Ulquiorra's a good guy now looking forward to more. |
derderxp chapter 6 . 6/10/2009 aw i wish you can continue this story! ( |
Jeanne Reveur chapter 6 . 9/12/2008 I am LOVING THIS! I thought the Mod-Soul was going to be Ririn, because of the child-gigai, and stuffed animal thing. Update when you can! XD |