That was sweet, I enjoyed it.

WOW

This really made my cry ... *sniffs*

But it was just wonderful ... *still sniffing*

THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Thara

This is so beautiful. I love the repitition of the final closing line in each piece - it is so poignant and so fresh with each turn.

I also love how vividly you create a scene, a moment, a story in so few words. It's just divine to read, and I love your take on their relationship. To have named their daughter Ariana seems so perfect, and furthermore to end the fiction with a moment between Minerva & Severus ends it perfectly.

However, I did find the mention of 'Rachel' a tad confusing?

Just beautiful.