Aww so cute!

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Poor Kyoya! Thankfully he came out and said-wrote-it in the end, for his and Tamaki's sake. Tamaki trying to pretend that Haruhi was Kyoya was tragic to read, but everything turned out really well in the end, and the journey there was fantastic too! o- Great writing!

It was so precious! These fics get me so much, I was really worried for the little bishies for a minute. .0. Or, that's a sign you have a very emotive, gripping style of writing. I liked it a lot. Thank you for posting!

You could have at least given Haruhi a happyer ending would it have killed you to give her one?

i liked this very much!

the front 2 chaps were really good, but the third was somewhat too abrupt. i supposed more description of tamaki's emotional state and kyoya's when he was walking away would have had a better effect

Aw! I loved it! Tho I do feel kinda bad for Haruhi...but if she knew that Tamaki was preoccupied when he was with her, watching over Kyoya and all, then she'll be ok, cuz it wasn't a total surprise for her. I like how it ended, you tried and you succeeded at the happy ending. Keep it up!

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Loved your storie if you do make another chapter will Haruhi also have a happey ending? I hope so if not then it my be selfish of Tamaki to lead her on just to brack her hart in the dosen't deserv that.

other then that Im adding this to my favorite author

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DUDE! YES ONE MORE ONE MORE! DO NOT LEAVE IT LIKE THIS! I NEED TO SEE A PROPER ENDING! Do update pls? ( dont leave it like this!

Pleaso, make another chapter! It was cute and... heartbreaking ;-)

Please make Tamaki catch story was well written. I realy dont read anything with "angst" in it ,but thought I would try this one. Good work (sob,sniff). You ask what to do? Well for me its romance, happy endings, and fluff (cant forget that).I am in awe of all fanfic writers , who can put such emotion in to their stories, and to make up the stories. I am one of the people who cant write. Only you for your hard work.

oh I love your story! Please make the next chapter. I'm a sucker for sad endings but if you want to make it happy I'll be happy too. I can't wait to see what you write!