Reviews for Waiter
math music reading chapter 3 . 7/29/2009
Poor Sasuke, I'm getting the feeling that Hinata is going out with Gaara. It would have been weird word choice for Naruto if it was him and Gaara did say there were having a lunch date. I don't think either one of them likes Sasuke much, this promises to be interesting and funny! Please continue this and update it soon!
math music reading chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
Ah immature Naruto, good entertainment value. I really like your Sasuke too, his acknowledgement of his own lack of social skills is awesome! Too bad about Hinata though, I wonder how she and Sasuke will be able to get together. Will you say where she is in school? Being the same age as Sasuke, she could be another genius and graduate college but at sixteen like Neji or still early. Is she still in highschool? Sorry, I know it's probably not that important but I personally believe Hinata is very capable. Afterall, she was able to perform the bet!
math music reading chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Hmm, interesting so far and definately funny. You are excellent when it comes to humor. I hope you continue this fic!
SarahiNia chapter 3 . 10/13/2008
I love it, and never mind hope Hinata and Gaara are boyfriend and girlfriend...I WANT TO KNOW MAN SO UPDATE SOON~
SarahiNia chapter 2 . 10/13/2008
Love the manager and so cute that Hinata and Naruto are dating!
SarahiNia chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
I dont think there mute...Well Maybe Hinata but NARUTO? thats Physically Impocible!
blackraven615 chapter 3 . 7/28/2008
Your not the only one confused Sasuke. So? Update soon? Yes? No? Please!
xyie chapter 3 . 6/28/2008
I wish to read more. Please update soon
Vampire Loser chapter 4 . 6/24/2008
hello vampire and dead are both here to cheer ya yup...

okay no were not cuz we sorta have the same problem as

you but we have eachother... not to rub it in

well hope u get over the writers block and

good luck with your stories

much ado ur friends

dead and vampire
Dark-sephiroth2 chapter 4 . 6/24/2008
yo i think you should keep writing this one "waiter" and "killing time" ive been waiting ages for it to update
aisha89 chapter 4 . 6/22/2008
PLZ,PLZ,PLZ, continue this story! it's so great and i just really wanna know what will happen next. PLZ!
HeartBrokenHinata chapter 4 . 6/21/2008
aah please update waiter and comatose
Allanah chapter 4 . 6/21/2008
PLEASE! I beg of you PLEASE! Don't stop this story! I love it so much! I'm sorry for whatever troubles you are having. Maybe you need a break. I'd do that, just to regroup ya know? Get your head straight, have a vacation, take time to get back into your stories. Whatever it takes to get the pep back in your step. I wish you the best in whatever it is you choose. Good luck! Bye!
iAmAnDaLwAySwIlLbE chapter 3 . 6/19/2008
I like this plot you got going on! Gaara's so stubborn! It's hillarious! Poor Sasuke's all caught up inbetween Hinata's man friends. By the way which one is her boyfriend? Or is Naruto just saying that so Sasuke can stay off?
maggieannteslow chapter 3 . 6/19/2008
Awesome story. I really love the plot and everything. I can't wait until the next chapter. And I agree with Sasuke, for once, it is confusing. I thought that Hinata was dating Naruto at first too, but from this chapter it seems that she is with Gaara. Anyway, really awesome story. Great job and keep up the awesome work.
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