Well, this is sad, a seemingly abandoned story about a series I'm just starting to get in to.

Anyways, it was a nice read, if there's ever an update I'll be glad.

This story is so good, I really do not want it to end!

...And the situation intensified.

Isn't that too OP for the first dungeon...? I mean, seriously. Well, the appearance of the mysterious man (Ivan maybe?) and the sloppily placed cliffhanger roused my desire for MOAR!

Will be waiting expectantly for chapter 11. Considering that the story will be updated this year. Yeah.

You've got to start updating more. I'm not even super into rune factory but I absolutely love your story.

Can't remember his name but I'm guessing the traveling guy with the staff (Ivan, maybe?) is the newcomer?
Anyways, so glad you updated! I adore this story and can't wait to find out what's next! Mei was wicked in this; the part where she was telling Raguna of the spider and he wouldn't listen was just classic. Poor Raguna, he keeps getting the worst of things. Lara was...well, Lara.

I thought some parts were more wordy than necessary, specifically during Melody's scene, but the chapter was still impressive! You capture the world of Rune Factory wonderfully!

YUSH A NEW CHAPTER YAY X3

Ooh, cliffhanger!

I'd really love to see more updates to this story. It looks like the plot is about to pick up. I've been sticking with this story for a while and it makes me sad when I look at the last updated sign and seeing it was more than 4 months ago.

Again I love what you're doing here, with the twists you're giving the original Rune factory plot. The idea of including more than just the protag in a dungeon crawl is simple but very effective. It makes it a whole lot more interesting and I'm glad you didn't just jump into the generators and everything. Some game novelizations just straight up describe the game to me and in that case I'd rather play the game, but you actually treat it with realism and like a real story. That makes me love it and really feel for the characters and the world. Continue soon good sir, and not in a year please!

Heh, I actually like your interpretation of Lara; it's exactly what she would be like if Natsume added some more faults. Lovely writing and thanks for updating again!

Yes, another update! This fic just keeps getting better and better. I really liked the dialogue between Mei and Lara, it was very entertaining. Oh, and you were right in the A/N; I had the distinct urge to slap Lara XD

Great work, I look forward to the next update!

BrowncoatJedi

Damn. That is one big cliff hanger.

An update?! Holy hell, somebody get me a friggn' table to flip!

Lol, just joking. Seriously though, it's good to see this story update. I'm actually surprised that nobody told Raguna about Returner magic, since it is on his weapon and in fact EVERYBODY'S weapons. (Except for Lara, because going into a cavern full of monsters with no weapons and just your belief that God will save you is enough to keep you alive. Save when it NEVER IS.)

What I love about this fanfic is that everything is so crazy and hyper but in such a clever and calculated way that I never feel like I'm reading crack or other nonsense. You've just gone and made such a believable, hilarious and crazy Kardia that I'd sell all my cows to move there. You, sir, have a talent, and if you don't become a novelist and put out a book (that I'll buy in a heartbeat), you'll be doing the world a great disservice.

Awesome chapter, and wow, I can't help but wincing at Lara...that seems so her...Also, I know it's a silly thing, but Lady Ann mentioned that Raguna has stayed for 3 days, but didn't you mention in the previous chapter that it was at least a week? Or am I mistaken?