alright I have to be honest I don't think I can read this anymore. one thing that turns me off the most would be the passive aggressive aurthor interruptions throughout the entire chapter. it reminds me of the early 2000s back when fanfics had the writer arguing with the character from said anime or reminds me of a time when people used lemon to describe NSFW. tho some stuff like saying if don't believe if yoga is his name I don't care ... kind of a dick move to the reader we are very aware that's his name no need to be messy about it.

there are some major holes beyond writers attitude. usually time travel fics like this need to be handled with care. this seems more like a crack fic to me vs something serious.

This look awesome

A Katie in Japan during that time period would be bizarre

Has Kagome forgotten everything that is going on in her time and that she is planning on leaving?

The story is moving too fast

How would he know that the Feudal Era was going to be in a hundred years? That would be like someone saying that a hundred years from now will be the Moon Era, they wouldn't know that because it doesn't exist yet. The Feudal Era term was named after it passed not before it happened.

Me gusto bastante, fue linda y conmovedora.

instead of waiting for onigumo (naraku human par), she should have tried to change his fate first

... Good show. Very good show

Hahha I loved this chapter. xD I really enjoyed this entire story.

Love love love it!

Is that why he was mad at her? Time travel is so confusing

What was in the letter?

I'm so confused on how all this is happening before she met him but he hated her later on

This story is so good!