Stop using part Japanese and English it is very confusing at a point and very irritating

I would love to know what happens next please write the next cahpter

Doom doom.
D d doo doom
Dddoooooom
DDDOOOOOOOIM D DOOM

I've been waiting for an update for two whole years now.. ;-;

I love this story, it's amusing and cute at the same time!

So,I guess I shouldn't have posted that review...I mean its,like,almost four years since last update...That means the author must have a reason for no updating-right?I guess the author is:
-dead,
-grounded from using Internet until 100 years old,
-other.
Anyway,I hope you update before the world ends.

Wowee ! This is the best danfic I've read so far! Pwease, pwease update*falls down onto knees with fake tears rolling down the cheeks*

I WOULD LOVE TO SEE BRICK KISS MOMOKO IN THE MIDDLE OF THE FIRST PERIOD AT SCHOOL AND...no idea what should happen next... :3 anyway, I loved this SOO MUCH! I hope you like my review and makes you feel happy!

I just wanna be of support to you! I love this forever and ever and always! "Yo-you actually thought I was going to KISS YOU?! Ew!" And later he kisses her? Aww he's just too adorable. Everything he does is cute. I'm soo in love with Brick!

Wow! I love your writing and this is so cute! Are Momoko and Brick gonna KISS again? :3

AWESOME!

Is Brick going to kiss Momoko at school or something so that he can embarrass her?

This is AWESOME!

As a JP student, I'll have you know that "ano" means "that" in Japanese... There is absolutely no need to put another language in your story (especially if you can't speak it )

Why so much spelling errors? This site has spell check. Don't ignore it...