I really enjoyed this story and all the follow up fanfics of the Evangelion / OMG crossover. I especially like the way Belldandy became a little more defensive of her relationship and of others meddling in her relationship with Keiichi. I thought that Sayoko (Bell's daughter) had a very sad upbringing but her life did took a turn for the better. The way Evangelion and OMG characters interacted with each other flowed in very natural way and didn't seem forced or fake. Overall all the stories were very nice to read.
However, I do have a couple of major gripes. First, the continued use of the same names, over and over again. There is basically an infinite number of names out there but somehow the author seem incapable of using different names for the never ending flow of new characters. Seriously, it got frustrating and old pretty quick. Second, like I said, a never ending flow of characters. I like the story, but there were, in my opinion, too many characters and it detracted from the overall story. It gave the story a sense of being big, and I liked that, but I think less characters would've been better.

And last. Keiichi's relationship with his kids. He basically has NO relationship with any of his kids with Belldandy. I don't remember a single piece of conversation between K and his daughter Sayoko or his son Kaima. Seriously, he is completely absent in their life, has no input on what happened to any of them and basically disappears from this story and all the other follow up ones. I understand that he is not a god or has any powers, but while Belldandy is almost everywhere getting involved in all the crazy events told here, Keiichi is mentioned only in some lines to remind the reader he still exists. Other than that, he could've been dead and not living in heaven like it was the case in this story and the reader wouldn't notice the difference. Like I said, a good to read fanfic with some very annoying flaws.

I really enjoyed your writing style, especially the OMG parts. You did an excellent job with believably evolving the relationship between Keichi and Skuld, which was a nice change from the usual pairing of Urd/Keichi as friends against Skuld trying to interrupt Keichi's and Belldandy's relationship. I also like your humanizing of Kami-Sama to being an involved father to his children and not the distant, all powerful god that nobody can understand or relate to that is often prevalent. I enjoyed the Evangelion parts as well throughout your different stories as I like both anime. I would really like it if you would do more pure OMG fanfict though because it is so rare, especially writings that can capture the characters in original stories.

Thanks for the story order. Its funny I just asked for one in my last review a few hours ago. Its quite an awesome set of fics you have here. Thanks for sharing.

there is now over 250 chapters, and excelent job

So far this story has been nothing but exellent.

The only thing that slghtly bugs me about it was that i wished there could have been more interactions with Keiichi and his daughter.

Im finalyy catching with this particula fic, for a couple of reasons I never started reading it although I followed all the other NGG ones... And reading from prologue to chapter 5 in a row, I can say it was my loss not checking it earlier... As usual you create a great story and as others have said, you just improved over time... Its amazing how much time has passed since the first fic in the series, it just looks like yesterday... :)

Very very well done, reminded me of a good movie that knew it was getting a sequel.

I know I seem to say it all the time, but I can't wait till your next installment in this series. There is still a lot to look forward to.

I'm also glad to see the return of Harry Potter, mainly because I love your rendition of Mana in this series.

I'm looking forward to a new year with new stories.

I'll be waiting.

Read ya Later

Heh, cant wait for the next stories!

You are at the tier of Trial By Tenderness!

The stories you have made are absolutely wonderful!

"Child of Angels"?

*Makes an immediate pre-order. Then remembers its a fanfic*

Damn.

*rolls out the pup-tent, grabs a Styrofoam cooler and my DS, and plops down in front of the laptop to wait until the next story starts*

I simply cannot wait for any story with Arael, or Gabby.

okay so I finally got home and read the chappie before i have to sleep and this is my review... :)

WHOA! just whoa! and now let's bow our heads in memory of Bell-chan and K1... the only conselation (yeah i know i can't spell lol) is that i know that they will be back ;) though i do wonder what happend between selene and sayoko... though i am assuming that the greaf over the loss of her parents caused lil Sayoko to all but forget her onee-sama. and once Selene got better she was probably too busy to visit sayoko... or something like that. (gah! what am i even babbleing about... this is what happens when one does not get proper rest and lives off energy drinks and pockey for the weekend. lol)

Anywho before i go (to bed cause yeah... i'm starting to babble A LOT lol), just wanna say (as usual) keep it up! and can't wait till the next chappie! yay! (less this is the final chappie for this fic... then you KNOW what I'm waiting for ;P)

Ikari, the bane of the heavens as well as it's only hope...sort of.

It's nice to have a little baby montage. They do grow up quickly. I've said it before but I'm getting more and more anxious about the Morisato's future unfolding. Knowing the end is one thing, but seeing the events that lead to that end are something else.

Hurry up with the next one!

Read ya Later

Ohh, timeskips!

And the inevitable #!$!(!%! moment when babies start saying things parents don't want them to hear. I feel very sorry for K1. While Bell probably didn't need to do more then frown at him (Hild has been known to take a few steps back from one of those), he's going to be sleeping in the doghouse for a day or two.

Urd is slowly slipping away, yet still at least trying to maintain cordial relations with her sisters, K1, and her niece. A nicely balanced setup just waiting for the tip over that occurs from the plane crash

BTW, will there be a minor 'Wrath of an Angry God' moment from this? I really want to see Kami-sama actually find something that hits his 'rage' button(s) when he realizes that due to performing 'hands off' he put his daughter's life at risk, and now it killed her & his son-in-law. Sort of a rage of helplessness that he didn't have a choice, but he really needs to vent.

Also, when's the "Grampa!" moment going to occur? I'm seriously waiting for the moment he's caught dancing in the streets.

Then there is the nice side tangent story of Selene getting filled in and the possibility of certain events (her combat training) leading directly to Cayla's birth. Should be extremely interesting to see how the 'switch' occurs, considering we never see Selene in the earlier works.

And finally, Bell finds the name that, depending on which generation it is, is either reviled as the evilest name in existence, or praised (even by Demons...grudgingly) as one of the finest protectors of humanity & the universe in general to have ever existed. And, if we really go the route of making Ikari hated, and we both know which one I'm talking about, that Ikari is the one that 'arranges' for the plane crash.

Would neatly explain just why there isn't an ounce of pity for him in all of Heaven.

"more worthy"? yikes! anyways. loved seeing all the snippits all put together. Loving Selene. Obviously. And what else is there to say? exsept wondering what Belldandy will do with the knowledge she has of Ikari...hm...

*POKE*

You still around?

Are you going to continue with this up to K1 & Bell's 'death' in the plane crash? That and finally give us the connection between Cayla & Selene?

Congratulations! Its a goddess!

*smirks*

Always wondered if Sayoko had a middle name (AFAIK Japanese generally don't have ones, but then the Morisato family is a...unique...exception) and now we know.

Interesting scene with Hild/Mara, and I do really want to see the first time Mara shows up at the temple now with Sayoko around, and Banpei/Sigel in full-up 'War Machine' guard mode. Btw, will we see a resolution for the issue of the Mara/Marller problem, in how all the new translations are going with 'Marller'? A nickname, or perhaps in the demon language/god's language that's the spelling, but in Japanese, its said Mara, and as the Goddesses & Mara/Marller are in Japan, it ended up being a 'preferred' pet-name for her that even she approved of. After all, Mara is the name of a demon iirc. *shrugs* Gives you an out for later on.

While we did see Kami-Sama do the 'Electric Slide' in his office (scene made of win, as the internet expression goes), when will we see his (in)famous 'dancing in the streets' moment? IIRC that was the first time she was able to call him 'Grandpa' or something close enough to that.

Finally, I am highly curious, but did Keima and Takano find out about Bell & her sisters being goddesses before their deaths? Secondly, just where have Sayoko's mortal grandparents been during this entire time up in heaven? I highly doubt there is a chance in hell they ended up in hell, or that their souls were 'removed' (ala: Mana's mother) from existence. And having both Sayoko's grandfathers meet would be a quite interesting experience. Of course, having Takano & Verdandi meet would be... enlightening. If nothing else Peorth & Lind would likely have tracked them down after their deaths to let them know Keiichi & Megumi are alive, and that Bell and (soon-to-be-born Sayoko) are safe.