This is a very interesting idea. Edie is very resourceful, that's for sure! I really liked this story.

I absolutely love these stories. There only constructive criticism I have to make is the use of Americanisms that a Brit would never use such a the word vacation is a little odd to read. But please carrying on writing I really want to know how the trilogy ends! X

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Not interesting, copyright laws.

You are aware that this is a breach of the rules, right? Which is ironic as this is a story about Percy. Other than that, it was a good story. I actually think I would've paired her with George because they got on so well during their scene at the world cup, and I'm a bit disappointed they never reconnected. I love muggle in the wizarding world stories!

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Good story, glad I read it. Percy, although not one of my favourite Weasley characters I believe is misunderstood, especially compared to all the magic and fun things we get to see. I think you portrayed him brilliantly, changing him enough for the readers to see he's not such a bad guy. I thought this storyline was really creative, and believable.

I love this! I like how the relationship wasn't forced or overboard.

What a really lovely story! Edie is such a great character, and through her I can finally see Percy's good points.

I loved this story! So great and everything seemed highly plausible. Well, as plausible as it can get considering it's Hogwarts.

Alright everybody! Collecive "Awwww!"

this was a good story! It held my interest to the very end (and no many stories do that, I tend to be picky) To keep with my tradition of comparing stories to food, I'd say that this would be a large bowl of hot soup, on a cold day, lasting a long time, satisfying, and warm.

Harry Potter isn't really my fandom nor is English my native language (as I'm sure you'll be able to see when you go to my profile), however, I was just wondering around FFN if I could read a couple of fanfics about the books I've obssesed over so much (I've got the whole Potterverse, most of it in English), and since I'm perfectly satisfied with the official shipping (even though I'd have preferred different pairings for just about everyone) I used the Search function of FFN to see if it turned anything interesting.

I searched "Muggle World", since I figured out a wizard stranded in the muggle world and viceversa should be an amusing thing to read. And, oh boy, wasn't I right? I found your marvellous, wonderful story and sat and read it at once.

I love Edie and that you married her to Percy, and how you tied Percy's distraught behaviour over breaking rules to his bad attitude in canon in GoF. That was really clever of you. Also, that she could do all those things without turning her into a witch at the end of the story and perfectly proud of being a muggle. It was sweet and touching of you.

I also liked how you let the years pass, because, really, it isn't eveyrday you're going to sutmble across evidence on Magical Britain, is it? And the sneaking around and the wait and anxiety of the simmer holidays and the lookout for anything interesting.

And, although your chapters are rather short, I feel they convey all the information we need to see through the eyes of Edie Filbert the Wizarding World.

I think one of the best scenes, albeit rather sad, was the one where she resigned herself and let herself be Obliviated by the Head Healer. After that I cpouldn't but cheer when she was being tortured and she got her memory back (even though that sure is a painful method of regaining her memory).

You are the first story I have reviewed in the Harry Potter fandom EVER and I've read plenty before, and you give good reason why this should be so.

Maybe you could do a sidestory about how they managed to get marreid? After all, although Percy has his sweet moments, he's rather haughty and Edie is much more easygoing.

Have a nice day,

Tsuki-nin

Cute fic.

Style is good, overall a nice read.

This was an outstanding story, two thumbs up. I loved the way the story flowed with the books, this was an excellent view into the hardest part of the wizarding world i.e. how to keep it all a secret. very nicely done, I will be reading the rest of your works. please keep up the great work G.

Awesomness, pure awesomness… :D