Sweater sounds very American. In the UK, if it is a knit garment worn for warmth with buttons down the front, its a cardigan. If it pulls on over your head, its a jumper.

What a story!
I really like Snily but haven't found many stories that suited my taste but I loved this! At first I was a little intimidated since it has 100 chapter but i enjoyed it thoroughly!
I don't blame you for Snape's attitude toward Dumbledore and as you mentioned, since the story is written form Snape's POV it's bound to be biased.

I was sad about Regulus' fate but I knew from the beginning that he would take Snape's place as spy for Dumbledore. I was surprised with Petunia and Sirius...well I didn't see that one coming and I would have thought it quite funny if Severus and Vernon ended up as brothers in law. But I was surprised that you didn't write anything about Petunia's reaction when Oliver was adopted by her parents, I can imagine her being quite jealous about having yet another magical sibling. Btw, Oliver completely disappeared in the last chapters, I expected him to be at least mentioned in the epilogue.

I loved the part when Severus took Lily flying, it reminded me of "Howl's Moving Castle" 3

How you dealt with Voldemort's demise was very...unexpected? But I wasn't disappointed; this is what happens when you underestimate others.
I liked how you mended the relationship between Severus and Tobias, to be honest I always imagined that Snape killed his father as some sort of initiation requirement for Half-Bloods to join the Death Eaters, that would have been a great reason for Tobias' premature death in Severus' previous life.
Oh, And Eileen, it was so sad she had to die and couldn't get to meet her grandson or her changed husband.

This was really great and it's sad that you currently aren't writing fanfics but since you are publishing your original work it's not really surprising that you have lost interest in fanfics.
Hope you are safe in these strange times!

Of course u are... U wrote the whole book! :)

i loveeee ur book but why is Severus so rude to Dumbledore?

I am really sorry for your grandparents:( It must have been really hard for you... My grandad works at a hospital too. I hope you are well,and happy New year everyone!

Happy holidays:) Sindie11 i really love your book!

OMG I CALLED IT

"...give you a chance." Is Lily implying that since Potter and Black thought Severus is already a DE and is a lost cause then it's justified for them to bully and assault him? That 6 years of mental, emotional, and physical abuse is all fine and dandy because he deserves it then? That as long as he proves himself to be a good person then he won't deserve any harm that they cater to him? I had high hopes that Lily finally has some understanding of Severus' trauma but clearly all Lily wants is to force Severus into making nice with his tormentors. And for what purpose?

This is more canon than the cursed child by leaps. I think about this story all the time. Thank you so so much.

My favourite story still after six years of reading fanfiction. Thank you so much.

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Snape is an idiot. His views are so colored in bitternes that he actually thinks the drivel he is spouting is the truth. Honestly i feel you haven't caught any of the characters personality right. Especially Snape and his views towards Dumbledore, dropped.

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