Mebuki is really ugly though

This story is fantastic! I laughed and squealed several times throughout this fanfic :D You're probably one of the best writers on this site in my opinion. I usually get bored when a story is this long, but I just want to keep reading more! I can't wait to read the sequel! (And I absolutely adore all the pairings that you created 3 )

Not criticizing, but I wanted to let you know that nine in Japanese is pronounced kyuu while pain is most commonly referred to as itami (damage/sore) or totsu (pain). The closest that I could see your original translation would be the word agony: pronounced Kutsū...sorry for the random vocab/pronunciation lesson :)

this was the first ever Naruto fan fiction I read way back in 2012 and it is still one of my absolute favourites. just remember ed hinata always sleeping on kankouro which made me want to reread it. thanks for writing such a great story!

it has been years since I have read this story(years!)... I still laugh. thank you

I would never have thought of any of the pairings you've written about, but they worked out beautifully somehow! I especially loved Anko X Hiashi, although I don't really read fanfiction about either of them, and I really loved Gaara X Hanabi (I'm glad they're getting a sequel!). I've stayed up reading this, and it was totally worth it. Can't wait to read the sequel :)

I absolutely enjoyed this story. There were pairings I never would have even thought of, but couldnt help but to root for. i cannot wait to read the next one.

I really..really..really love this fic! U are so amazing writer! U make me laugh so hard,especially when Gaara said about make Neji's pregnant.. lol..i really loved ur unique pairing,especially Hiashi and Anko (never crossed my mind about this pairing),and so excited about Gaara and Hanabi pairing.. i love Anko! She so funny! I actually want Hiashi have one more boy,but never mind..u picture Gaara so differently,he just like other normal man and not stoic or emotionless man like many fic picture him...i love him more now! When i saw this fic about KankxHina,it not attracted me to read,but now i just did and i cant believed that i actulally finished it! I love fic with many pairing and not just focus for only one pairing for the whole fic..and now,i'll definitely read the sequel! Thanks for this lovely story! ;)

Ah seems we get the same idea!
I wrote few years ago a story were Kankuro was comparing Hinata to Orihime and -with a tinge of bitterness- Naruto to Ikobochi to cheers her up and make her go through her shyness (my ppooor kankuro, it had hurt my feelings to make him sad on purpose XD)

Had I yet make mention that I love your portrayal of hanabi too ? XD

the epicness of the sex of that two XD

Your Anko's characterisation is priceless

the hiashi anko scene was surprizingly hooot ! (must admit it has lil turned me on XD)

HELL the hiashi-ankos'interaction are priceless ! XD

Anko is the very best woman in the show XD

Well, it's not something important... bug that keep bugging me since the beginning, so I need to say it eventually...
For me the one purple-haired is Yugao and the blueish one is Hinata (but it's seems people sees colors in different ways)

Damn those two dorks (Kankuro and Hinata) are helpless-lost-causes ... XD