Jacob Carrson or whatever his name was (bad memory) Love the book

I give up. The childish games are too much for me. When Lily plays with James' affections, she's not worthy of him. You've written a character I don't care for, so I'll move on to something more to my liking than a game playing Lily.

I'm not sure why you want us to care about Lily and James. You've got Lily more involved with Sirius than James. What's up with that? You seem to be going no where with your story. You might try longer chapters with more depth in terms of character development. You seem to be on the surface only. All of your characters seems to be one dimensional.

I know that I'm a bit late at reviewing chapter 4 but I'd like to point out that there really were no "virtual games" in the 70's and there was only one phone with a wire in a household at those times. Other wise it's quite nice story so far :).

nice :)

This is ridiculous. Sirius calls Lily and bitch and she's the one who apologizes? I don't think so. I'll read something less mysogonistic.

are you going to continue with this story..? it's really good.. i hope you do.

Grr... Die, Jacob, die! No, not really, but I would't be able to stand for it if he wins.

I really dont like the way that remus is acting i mean after all james done for him he says something like that

so when the next chapter up?

Its the NECKLACE!

Flipping fantastic story. Interesting, unique, and perfect mix of funny, sad, and suspenseful.

I quite like this rather serious reason for making the Maurader's Map.

I like Jacob Carson, and it is kind of depressing that their relashionship has no hope because Lily is destined to be with pot- james.

oh always the drama!

luv,

Candibear

This is an amazing story! I love it. I can't wait for more. Please up- date! I love Lily and James stories!