I read all of this in just about one sitting yesterday even though I haven't read the first two parts... LOL. Really good story, even though I disagree that Don ever didn't realize that he loved Charlie. I wish some of the miscommunication had been cleared up more, and Charlie deciding to fake a relationship with Don was screwed up , but Don was the only one who had to apologize for anything. But I still got really into this story and it really was really well written.

I really appreciated the strength you gave to Charlie to withstand the torture and not tell what he knew with millions of lives on the line. That felt really true to his character, especially with everyone around him being surprised just how much he can ensure.

My heart broke for all three Eppes, Alan being told Don was killed, Don and Charlie both thinking each other dead at different points and all watching each other go through some really awful things. Charlie going into the coma was devastating! Another thing I really appreciated was how well you had Alan balance Charlie and Don. Well done.

Just re-read your story it really is amazing the way you bring the characters to life, making the storyline believable. I hope you are still writing. It would be great to read a new numb3rs story from you thank you

Wow you really gotta hit me with those feels huh! Dang! I've gotta say, my favorite work of yours so far!

Excellent story. Thank you

While I'm not a fan of Amita back with Charlie (not surprisingly, lol, but this time it's because of her past actions in this universe), this 3rd part made this series kind of perfect. I feel like such a horrible human being for loving the heavy angst... And of course, the best part, as always, are the brothers and especially when they're close and happy.

This was one of the best stories I've read! Normally I avoid stories that are this long, but this was worth every second! Thank you so much and God bless you!

Wow .what a story just an amazing storyline so many twists and turns. Couldn't put it down

I don't have the words to say how much I enjoyed this. What a brillIant end to such an epic tale!

This was sensational, Serialgal! I do not know how you are able to do it, but, you have, once again, written a truly fantastic tale. This was so intense, so moving, and so emotional, and it was quite the thrill ride, too.

That was so fantabulous! I absolutely love the way you write! It is so sweet and intense. I get so into the stories. Keep up the fabulous work!

I was afraid, very afraid when I ran across this story. The intensity of the previous stories were overwhelming that I was afraid that poor Charlie and Don, let alone me, could not survive this time. And 53 chapters was a cause for concern. You see, I usually read these stories right before going to bed and I just knew if I started on this one I wouldn't be able to help myself and would be turning page after page because I NEED to know what is coming next. But, I just couldn't deny myself a Serialgal story(because they are so good) and the promise of some Ian whumping (he so deserves some for what he did to Charlie) I threw caution, and sleep to the wind and dug in. And boy am I glad I did. The action, angst and whumpage had me on pins and needles but it was the emotions in the story that really affected me. It was so rich and layered and so beautiful; I loved it.
(no I'm not talking about chocolate cake) ;)
BRAVA! BRAVA! BRAVA!

That was just so awesome. Please write more like this. Thank u

LOVED THE STORY! OMG! FANTASTIC! SO MUCH EMOTION AND ANGST AND BROTHERLY LOVE! OMG! LOVE IT! congrats on completion!

I just spent all day and night of new year's eve and new years reading the Marked Trilogy, getting about three hours of sleep. Powerful writing!

What a great speech!