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I absolutely loved this story! Great work!

You. Are still my favourite author.
Your writing style is just...
Ugggh.
You seem to be able to keep everything interesting, everyone involved, and the vocabulary wide, despite keeping a consistent style throughout the story. You have a way of somehow making things your own, in more ways than just writing things down. It's a feeling, and that's what makes you different and amazing. Thanks for the amazing read.

Very cute story, I can relate to L's embarrassment, and in general I absolutely love the story. Great work! I love Death Note!

Awwww! Fan-Girl squealing Right Now!

Hormonal Teenager And A Detective That's Never Been In A Relationship You Could Imagine That There Clothes Would Be Destroyed Wink-Wink.

Peverted And Clinging L Is So Funny And Adorable.

Good Job On Female Light.

Good Job!

Cute loved it

I love your story ! We can't find fem ligot story everywhere and the fait that you think of making one is very great !
I ma sorry of what I write is not clear... I'm french :)

Hehe I love your ending. :DDDDD

I just realised that this book is complete.

*rainbows*
*sunshine*
*everything-amazing*

:3

*squealing inside* This is really, really interesting, its adorable, the characters are portrayed amazingly, I love this...AND THERE'S ONLY NINE CHAPTERS SO I'M ALREADY A THIRD F THE WAY THERE ITS AMAAAZZZIIINNGGGG

I really like the idea of a female Light! Thank you for writing this :)

Lol!
Now there are two L's Lawliets..
Pretty interesting! I like how theirrelationship develops, and how you keep their base personalities a little, like Light's slight sociopathy and L's paranoia..
I imagine their babies should be.. Interesting..
Anyhow!
Poor Light! Misa Misa keeps finding her lol!
Thank you for sharing this nice story! I enjoyed reading it :)

Hello, I liked your fic, hopefully more chapters follow up soon, but I do not like here is Light at end of the day here is a girl, and Light is actually a guy, but hey, that cruel is Light , L is a person, is really so silly?, that Light is sometimes silly, does not realize that the L considers his best friend and he feels something more for him, and that he has always considered his friend and as L has, and does, or that it was something bad or disgusting feeling that for L, I did not like so much drama and angst, but was not bad, I would have liked to see more development in the relationship of L and Light and that bad, they throw the blame on L of all, I would have liked to see more action between them, I love how L dominates Light, hehe, my favorite couple is LxLight provided that Light will be the uke is so cute, although it is a shame as there are very few fics of them so, hopefully make more fics of those two, you keep it up, thanks and kisses.